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Had I Been
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I should have grown up in a field
with my feet pushed deep in the ground
and my hands massaging the soft back
of the wind. I should have had beet blood
or carrot skin. Had I been born
in a scuffed cradle of warm soil and dung,
I would have seen the coming of spring with all
the thoroughness of a potato; I would have danced
on the tips of my toes for the summer sun;
I would have held my breath between the weeds
and had my itches scratched with a hoe.
Had I been a bean, I would have shouted
my love with blossoms and kept my army
of children hidden. I should have had
the slender wrists of a tomato and the big dreams
of a cabbage. I should have stood proudly
in a long row. I would have been
reciting to myself had I been a stalk of corn.


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 Reviews of "Had I Been"
Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
This is a poetic vegetable patch with a difference. I loved the imagery here and there are a few gems that I just wish I had written first, lines like "hands massaging the soft back of the wind" The absurdity of some of the comparisons such as "the slender wrists of a tomato" only serve to make this poem fascinating and it is one that is sure to linger on in my mind. What an imagination you have!
Chanti

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Dear C J

What a wonderfully creative delight.
Beautifully penned.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Love this. It reflects on so many things we should have done.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Ripe with imagination, abounding in creativity. Love the tone and cadence as well. Good and crispy stuff here.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
I absolutely love this poem, it is so intune with the Earth and life.


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