I saw nine of them sleeping in the sun. They were like dead gladiators from several nations: One was a fierce African, he wore a helmet of battered fur; two were Asians, they had mysterious Eastern masks strapped firmly to their faces with tiger stripes; three were stout Persians, they were bundled in robes of white, off-white, and gray; two were obviously barbarians, dingy but very strong; one was delicate and slight, but his proud scars were long and overlapping like twine.
One by one they rose from the crumbling pedestals as a half-bowl splash of sunlight leaked from the Colosseum and drenched the hills of Rome. Late afternoon. Time for these gladiators to rat where lions roared centuries back. I watched them go. The wind rose from the throats of a hundred entrances and became one cry. Like rude Romans, the tourists spinkled popcorn and pretzels on the stained stones. The cats went deeper into the arena, under the wheels of invisible chariots. I stared at my imaginary emperor, and I cheered as he pointed his thumb at the ground. Then my blood rose along the Tiber of my veins, and the nine brave cats disappeared into a lion's pit. It was nearly dark when I left the Colosseum.
richly illustrated, the reader wants to read more...and is slightly disappointed when it ends...i was! a visual masterpiece! well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2004
A visually entrancing poem!
I particularly liked this line: 'The wind rose from the throats
of a hundred entrances and became one cry.'
Excellent imagery.
I identified with this poem..I am in Rome at least once per year, to visit family, and am always amazed at the huge population of feral cats living among the ruins...You presented a great take through a unique perspective...Enjoyed
fabulous write. i was back in the Colosseum, and i haven't been there for nearly 30 years. could see the tourists spilling popcorn and the circus outside... "a half-bowl splash of sunlight leaked
from the Colosseum and drenched the hills of Rome." this image is just spectacular. now, i think i'll go rent "Gladiator" again. :)
richly illustrated, the reader wants to read more...and is slightly disappointed when it ends...i was! a visual masterpiece! well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
I particularly liked this line: 'The wind rose from the throats
of a hundred entrances and became one cry.'
Excellent imagery.
from the Colosseum and drenched the hills of Rome." this image is just spectacular. now, i think i'll go rent "Gladiator" again. :)