"...we shake off the layers of angry, fearful sleep
and see the sun again for the first time in years...
going back to the cave is not an option
we have seen the darkness of our sleep...."
are two that resonated within my soul. Excellent!
And welcome to Author's Den, you're among friends.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Louisa Middleton-Blake (Reader)
Reviewed on June 30, 2007
I have just read this poem, and some on your website. You are certainly gifted with words, and know how to construct them artistically. They are very thought provoking, and ooze with philosophy and wisdom, and you're an artist too! Great talent, and I wish you all the luck with your work, and the very best for the future.
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
"...we shake off the layers of angry, fearful sleep
and see the sun again for the first time in years...
going back to the cave is not an option
we have seen the darkness of our sleep...."
are two that resonated within my soul. Excellent!
And welcome to Author's Den, you're among friends.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
nicely done
john+