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Naked in the Sand
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Naked in the Sand
 
We walked along lakeside today
Hand in hand, barefoot in sand
Unfortunately, I had to unfold
My hands to pick up a shell
It was so beautiful, dear
I wish you were there
 
We played a game of catch today
Kicking up the sand all along
Loping, giggling, splashing
But I fell down on my rear
Too much laughing, dear
I wish you were near
 
And then in the cove, made love
Just you and I as one my lover
Nature engulfed our bodies
In pure heavenly delight
Perfect rapture, dear
Oh how I yearned
 
We made a small fire in the pit
Just as the sun began to sleep
We sat there all cuddled up
And reveled in the beauty
It was marvelous, dear
I missed you terribly
 
We fell asleep on bed of sand
Warmed with gentle breeze
Morning then softly arose
Caressing us with day
A superb morn, dear
Naked, in the sand
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 Reviews of "Naked in the Sand"
Reviewed by Carvin Wallson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2009
Good imagery, and an interesting premise to write a poem from. Your control of the language is very good as well. I would like to know more.
Reviewed by Alan Busch
Reviewed on January 1, 2009
A sensual fantasy of all that might have been ...

Alan Busch
Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on November 14, 2008
"Naked in the Sand" almost says it all. But your verses add romance and sensuality.

And OMG, what a lovely way to awaken: Beside your lover, naked in the sand!

Very nicely done. I love it!
Richard
Reviewed by David Delaney
Reviewed on August 12, 2008
Beautiful writing Deborah, enjoyed every word.
Dave.
Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on June 20, 2008
Very simply romantic enduring write, and so glad it happened with the sand and ocean near. Beautifully written and appears to be in a style all your own.
Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on June 5, 2008
Quite a revealing perusal into your thoughts and emotions. -- Jeff
Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2008
whoaaa ok well this was beautiful and deeply enchanting
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 20, 2008
Deborah,

Very beautiful imagery. Romantic and sensual. Peace, Love and Blessings, Paul.
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