Good write, I too am a zodiac person and you too are aging very well amid the laughter and the memories. May you have many more years together and always love each other.
Japanese format with a twist... This is mysterious, open to countless interpretations. I feel so much of the illusion/delusion game in this.
But also a soothing quality.
As for the portrait, in terms of ruin ;-) the old woman's face looks more refined and "complete" than the cold and shadowy face of the younger one.
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
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But also a soothing quality.
As for the portrait, in terms of ruin ;-) the old woman's face looks more refined and "complete" than the cold and shadowy face of the younger one.
Interesting...
Axilea
wonderful! Jasmin Horst
Good job, Keith.
So much said in few words--succinct perfection! You (and your wife) have captured aging exactly! Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.