Speak to me with his voice
With warmth I feel
Is my choice
Warm me with his touch
Ever reaching climbing keeping
The friendship means so much
My gift is such
So simple
Really
Still mine to give...
To you
So light
And free
To build
With snow's
Momentum
Such speaking
Rhapsody
That brings you here to me...
And calls me there to you.
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Reviewed by chris stienstra (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
Eloquent!!!
"With snow's momentum.....a great picture for me to see and experience. "Still mine to give"....I love this realization that the emotions belong to you for the giving. I loooooved this work.
My best regards
Chris
...and as the snow purifies what's seen in shades of white on white, I'll wash my soul in the poet's words and my heart in your pleeasant dream. Very good Jen...love this concept.
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Fee
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"With snow's momentum.....a great picture for me to see and experience. "Still mine to give"....I love this realization that the emotions belong to you for the giving. I loooooved this work.
My best regards
Chris
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Fee
A beautiful poem filled with expectation,
Kathy