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The Miraculous Visit
by Debbie K. Edmiaston → (All Poetry by Debbie K. Edmiaston)
  
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A heart wrenched with sadness,
For a sister, gone, too soon…
Things were said & guilt prevails;
Oh, God, please help!

Too late to say I’m sorry…
Too late to say I love you…
Though I say it every day...
God, please let her hear.

I remember the days…
We were inseparable…
Laughing our cares away…
Then God took her home.

Why do we say things,
That we really don’t mean,
And hurt the ones we love most?
God, tell her I’m sorry!

It’s her birthday today,
I sang to her this morning,
And talked to her all day.
God, do You think she heard?

I’m lying here in bed,
I sense someone beside me.
I turn and there she is!
God, don’t let me be dreaming!

She leans down and hugs me,
I feel her arm under my hand,
She says, “I love you, Debbie”.
Oh, God, thank You!

I say “I love you, too”
Then she’s gone in a breath
Her love & forgiveness clear…
Oh, God, what a wonderful gift!

I lost my younger sister, June 2001. It's something you never get over. I miss her terribly...

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 Reviews of "The Miraculous Visit"
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on March 1, 2003
sad, sisters are special

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on September 26, 2002
She lives one with your love!!
Beautiful heart felt tribute!
Take Care-Dale

Reviewed by Peter Adotey Addo
Reviewed on September 20, 2002
A wonderful tribute to your sister...and the Poem is also a good one ...Thank you for sharing

Reviewed by Smoke Martin (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2002
Wonderful Deb and so sad. I am facing this only I'm the one going. She hears you. And sister's know.......we just know!!!
God BLess

Reviewed on September 17, 2002
i'm sorry for your loss (((HUGS))) and know that i care...emotional write, this...love, karla. :(

Reviewed on September 17, 2002
so moving and so sad, i can feel the pain.Great poem...

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on September 17, 2002
Thats Beautiful Debbie, I know it must be hard.

Reviewed by Gumby Pokey (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2002
I know the feeling only too well
but now she is watching over you
as my brother is me
this was a very tearful write and you did it so well God Bless You

Reviewed on September 17, 2002
i am so sorry for your loss. may jesus bring you a peace and a comfort that passes all understanding. sad, heartwrenching write!! (((HUGS))), your friend, karen lynn. >tears <

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2002
I know she hears and will always return your great love for her. Beautiful poem.

Reviewed by Sailor Neptune (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2002
So very sad..
Neptune


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