Paper to Pen (poem) by J AG on AuthorsDen

Paper to Pen
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To the power of creation when we put pen to paper and paper to pen....
I lie here waiting for the stroke of your pen, the brass tip dipped in blackest ink dripping thickly into the well like sweet southern molasses over a tray of pralines coating each nutty mound, a delicious bacchanal confectionary to savor bit by bit, swallowed slowly and washed down with the kiss of a mint julep. From the sheets where I lay, take your place above me and press your intentions against the fibers of my being, put your words in calligraphy upon my lines, swirling ephiphanies released one letter at a time, combined into expressions at times baffling the mind. Continue, oh instrument of the word smythe, continue on your journey from border to border, ever closer, within an inch of breaking the boundary, inking your impressions permanently, passionately, gliding to and fro until at last there is nothing more than to dot the i. And then with the fire of the white candle that lights your master's way, bring the heat as as an offering, singe my edges, oh hand that wields the mighty pen, and burn me . . . burn me.

Reviewed by Jenata Ayro

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

Could feel the
pressing,the soft
movement while your
nib glides along
this fleece, drawing
up the and down the
upon this leaf.

The pulling up and
taunting the edge
of dusks end, to the
excited rim of dawn
searching the dew.

Saying it's
thank....ing you.

Thanks for the
read.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Jag, I was feeling all the immense passion in your poem, like a seduction....your words just flowing & undressing in away & dancing... then heartbreak....Bam..oh the pain that jolted in the burn...Excellent Poetry
Great Emotions Expressed Poetess!
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Beautiful imagery and content. Flows like a bubbling stream. There is still many good things in life, and your poetic aptitudes are certainly one of them for me. Blessings poetess!
Richard

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Wow - this is superb writing.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

J you can so delight the senses and the mind with the seemingly easy way you manage to use poetic metaphors to express your passion. I could imagine the writer at their boudoir desk composing poetry and from time to time glancing at the lanquid body of her lover naked on the bed perhaps reading a book. Bare skin softly glowing with silk sheets covering just so much...wow what inspiration that would be. Better stop now or this may become a novella.
hugs
Fee