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The Debut
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The pleasure is all mine....

I watch her from a corner in a dark room

she’s expertly conducting court with her peers

gathered around her like drones around their queen

drawn to her majesty, beauty in dreams

of visions she pulls out of her hat

what did not exist a few hours earlier

now glowing brightly on the canvass

i tip my glass in a toast to her talent

that she sees in the mirror before her

she smiles then returns to her glory

well earned praise found on every page

shared by those who received an invitation

to the public viewing and i sit back and watch

with great pride and peace knowing

that i need no invitation

every night of my life

is a private showing.

 


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 Reviews of "The Debut"
Reviewed on October 31, 2008
This is so beautiful Jackie
& especially embraceful within the trust & devotion of love
There is No Greater Calm To Know Such A Loyal Devote Place In The Heart As "The Debut" allows love to spread her wings & soar knowing love's loyalty at home.
Peace, Love & Poetry
Much Love To You Always Poetess :)
Embraced~Embrassè
Vickie

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 27, 2008
The love and admiration you exhibit here is like a waterfall poetess ...

What you evoked in me ...
"gathered around her like drones around their queen"
this tremendous image is so solidifying to the whole of the piece. With it you express your understanding (to this reader) of grand design, and that there are many pieces that make the whole function, and that they all have a purpose, and that the attraction of certain pieces to other pieces is not necessarily arbitrary but perhaps predestined.
Blessings ...

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 22, 2008
Wow this one really gets inside the mind with it's clarity and smiling love. I can picture the warmth emanating from your heart towards this person and that equates to love.
Well done Jag,
hugs
Fee


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