His red Chevy convertible,
low slung, high finned,
slid to a dusty stop
with Jerry Lee Lewis’ “Great Balls of Fire”
rocking the branches overhead.
White T-shirt tucked into cuffed jeans,
hair combed back like James Dean,
a pack of cigarettes rolled in his sleeve,
he leaped over the car door
and wrestled me to the ground,
greeted my father
with an insult about hillbillies,
reached in the back
and tossed him a Pabst Blue Ribbon.
Soon he fishtailed away
to seek out old friends and sweethearts.
“Be back for supper,” he called to my mother.
For the rest of that frantic week it was the same;
sudden arrivals, sudden laughter, sudden departures.
That last night after a wild ride
he gave me a sip of his beer
as we lay back
on the still warm hood of his car.
He pointed out shooting stars
but my glance was too slow.
“You have to watch the whole sky,” he said,
“Don’t look in just one place.”
When he left the next day, silence descended
and fields resumed their calm growing.
I stared across the rolling hills
seeking a last glimpse,
remembered to watch the whole, not just one place.
Between blackberry blooms white as light
clustered in their constellations beside the road,
I saw the red flash far off,
there and gone
like a shooting star.
One must remember that when the arrow flies we can't see it only in one place but through all the sky, like a shooting star.
Nice little story, full of humanity.
Saw a shooting star go by quickly to the ground in front of me last night, just as I had come home from fireworks in another town. I was amazed how quickly it disappeared. I had seen them before and was surprised one greeted me last night and I surely did make a wish on it too.
Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 28, 2008
Brilliant poetical story you pen! Vivid and entertaining describing so very well how people come and go like a hurricane into our orderly lives. Well Done! Deborah
Braking I hope,to miss a deer, the lights just a tap, tap of brake, to keep on the road, to keep straight and steer . . .
Maybe . . . I liked the poem. I could picture it.
Dear David now I understand why it says "a visit should never be more than three days". It is always nice to welcome a guest and then it is a relief when they are gone. My Mom used to say "do not heat your chair when you visit". As usual I admire your poems which remind me the way stories are told in other languages.Emile
wistful cousin eyes... I had them myself. I love the atmosphere of this piece...the calm backing of the farm life slowly growing, juxtaposed to shooting stars darting in and out of a young boy's life. Tail lights between blackberry blooms flashing out of sight...once seen, they're gone forever--same as certain stars in a certain person's eyes when the light dawns, knowledge replacing innocence... a great poem, David. Truly great. It captures a whole slew of childhood memories in a flashing glance of hind-sight. --Charlie
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Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
time and space, like a shooting star in a nanosecond.
Cheers
Alain
I have enjoyed the reading of "Shooting Star".
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Cryssa
Nice little story, full of humanity.
Georg
Maybe . . . I liked the poem. I could picture it.
Thanks,
Dan
I epecially love the last three lines. -gene