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Shooting Star
by David C. Hightower → (All Poetry by David C. Hightower)
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David Hightower

SHOOTING STARS


His red Chevy convertible,
low slung, high finned,
slid to a dusty stop
with Jerry Lee Lewis’ “Great Balls of Fire”
rocking the branches overhead.
White T-shirt tucked into cuffed jeans,
hair combed back like James Dean,
a pack of cigarettes rolled in his sleeve,
he leaped over the car door
and wrestled me to the ground,
greeted my father
with an insult about hillbillies,
reached in the back
and tossed him a Pabst Blue Ribbon.
Soon he fishtailed away
to seek out old friends and sweethearts.
“Be back for supper,” he called to my mother.
For the rest of that frantic week it was the same;
sudden arrivals, sudden laughter, sudden departures.
That last night after a wild ride
he gave me a sip of his beer
as we lay back
on the still warm hood of his car.
He pointed out shooting stars
but my glance was too slow.
“You have to watch the whole sky,” he said,
“Don’t look in just one place.”
When he left the next day, silence descended
and fields resumed their calm growing.
I stared across the rolling hills
seeking a last glimpse,
remembered to watch the whole, not just one place.
Between blackberry blooms white as light
clustered in their constellations beside the road,
I saw the red flash far off,
there and gone
like a shooting star.

 

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 Reviews of "Shooting Star"
Reviewed by Alain Gracio
Reviewed on February 1, 2009
nice narrative and prose, and to think thoughts and reality transcend
time and space, like a shooting star in a nanosecond.
Cheers
Alain

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi Benyehu (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2009

I have enjoyed the reading of "Shooting Star".

I salute You, Poet.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on August 21, 2008
This leaves me with a sense of nostalgia about going home...and lessons taught from those I love.

Cryssa

Reviewed by Amy Feemster
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
I like this one, it sums up coming home impact and love in one stroke, I hadn't thought about this, Amy.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 10, 2008
One must remember that when the arrow flies we can't see it only in one place but through all the sky, like a shooting star.
Nice little story, full of humanity.

Georg

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on June 29, 2008
Saw a shooting star go by quickly to the ground in front of me last night, just as I had come home from fireworks in another town. I was amazed how quickly it disappeared. I had seen them before and was surprised one greeted me last night and I surely did make a wish on it too.

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 28, 2008
Brilliant poetical story you pen! Vivid and entertaining describing so very well how people come and go like a hurricane into our orderly lives. Well Done! Deborah

Reviewed by Linda Newton Perry
Reviewed on June 26, 2008
Braking I hope,to miss a deer, the lights just a tap, tap of brake, to keep on the road, to keep straight and steer . . .
Maybe . . . I liked the poem. I could picture it.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on June 23, 2008
David, this is one awesome poem, a story well told.

Thanks,
Dan

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 22, 2008
David, this is so full of quiet emotion. It's just beautiful. The last three lines, wonderful. How I love your poetry.

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Reviewed on June 22, 2008
Dear David now I understand why it says "a visit should never be more than three days". It is always nice to welcome a guest and then it is a relief when they are gone. My Mom used to say "do not heat your chair when you visit". As usual I admire your poems which remind me the way stories are told in other languages.Emile

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on June 22, 2008
wistful cousin eyes... I had them myself. I love the atmosphere of this piece...the calm backing of the farm life slowly growing, juxtaposed to shooting stars darting in and out of a young boy's life. Tail lights between blackberry blooms flashing out of sight...once seen, they're gone forever--same as certain stars in a certain person's eyes when the light dawns, knowledge replacing innocence... a great poem, David. Truly great. It captures a whole slew of childhood memories in a flashing glance of hind-sight. --Charlie

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on June 22, 2008
Wonderful, David. Just a wonderfully written poem.
I epecially love the last three lines. -gene


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