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The Dancing Fool
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David Hightower - The Dancing Fool - free verse - Appalachian Poetry

THE DANCING FOOL

Every morning my wife and I see him
at the end of his driveway
waiting for the yellow bus,
earphones clamped religiously to his head.
His thin, awkward body whirls,
a desert dervish celebrating the dawn,
dancing to rhythms only he can hear.
Flesh and bone his tools,
music his muse,
he carves sculptures of air.
Invisible in the classroom,
he is a mythic god when alone,
eternally dancing
through our radio’s morning broadcast
of new diseases, scandals and wars,
immune to the patriotic slogans and somber speeches.
Only the young can be so joyously foolish,
so ignorant, so oblivious.
Every morning,
fall, winter, spring,
wet, cold, green,
he shares his rhythmic revelation
with two laughing teachers
on our way to school.
Thank you, God,
for dancing fools.



 

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 Reviews of "The Dancing Fool"
Reviewed by Richard Atwood
Reviewed on June 18, 2011
I like you better than Billy Collins.

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on January 22, 2009
Very catchy, lively and amusing too. Great job.
Cheers, J'nia

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on December 22, 2008
Perfect title..and description of an undamaged soul. Enjoying the simple things unaware of the heartaches of the world...or else just don't care!
CarolHawks

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on December 10, 2008
your poetic insight into what most would breeze over as the insignificant spasms of a crazy youngster are most rewarding -- your choice of words, relating and telling the story so elegantly, accurately and permitting us to glean , just the right perception -- I enjoyed this work, it left me refreshed with new ideas of observation -- peace to you David as you observe, the art of the dance -- JMW

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on December 10, 2008
Nice work David, interestingly we wish for those ideas of life where we are like the ones who are blind to the ways of the world...where we can become like them and dance away the very moments of time...to be a part of them would mean we are the dancing fools of our very own dreams...

nice work...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 26, 2008
This ties in beautifully with the favourite quote mentioned on your Biog, David. It's a wonderful expansion of the idea and strikes a real chord in my own soul. The visuals here are great, from the observer's point of view and, for me, they conjure what it means for each of us truly to inhabit the reality of what "lies between our ears", unseen and unknown to onlookers. And it brings out another truth that music and media impress upon our minds and senses quite contrasting worlds to inhabit. Reckon that I, for one, will always be a dancing fool! Thoughtful and tightly-crafted work. Thank you, Kate xx

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on November 26, 2008
...a fine write...images and thoughts...find movement in your words...for all seasons.
excellent David...
John

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on November 24, 2008
Great title and poem.. and like you said maybe better than the news and other "distractions" adults drown the morning in... but then look at some of today's lyrics and "mechanistic" rhythms and you wonder?
The kids don't seem any better for it... I'll be dancing to the rustling of "my bamboo tree" while I'm doing my yoga moves...
As usual "you ARE the poetic observer par excellence!"

Reviewed on November 24, 2008

An interesting picture... "The Dancing Fool" sings to call for awareness...

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU



Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on November 23, 2008
David, not only a great observation, a visual joy, a musical
delight as we dance along, but also a technical feast:

a desert dervish celebrating the dawn,
dancing to rhythms only he can hear...

music his muse

wonderful alliteration throughout. -gene.


Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on November 23, 2008
David, you have such a genius way to create visuals in the heart and mind, this poem is no excception. Well done!

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 23, 2008
You make me to see that one dancing to a music inside his head (and thanks for it! whit the rhythms going around) with this poem you painted for an old man a picture of thinks we don't understand, because we never ever danced like that or went around seemly talking to ourselves (what with those new phones!)

Georg


Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on November 23, 2008
David, I love this. The imagery so perfect, and these lines, "Invisible in the classroom, he is a mythic god when alone," are my favorite. I think we all can learn a lot from the young!

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on November 22, 2008
I am glad that you ended the poem as you did...I was a little offended that you would call this dancer a fool, but ending it as you did took all offense away... hee, hee...
Maybe I felt that way because I could see my son...an exuberant six year old...dancing like that...minus the headphones and just dancing to music in his own head or mouth... hee, hee...
In the end, you are right...maybe we are the fools for not getting up and joining the dance.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on November 22, 2008
I love this a lot-- I think it's because your dancing fool reminds me for all the world of my little brother-- you know the one-- anyway, it's precious to see the hidden side of invisible people. This reminds me also, that when I'm laughingly calling someone else a fool, the joke's on me. Better to hear the music and dance, than to hear and seek the gloomy and go placidly through life.

On another note (no pun intended), I love the end sounds in this poem. You've got an on-gooing "oo" theme --also the short lines of "morning", "spring", and "green". It ties it all up into a marvelous package.

I also love the visual images made with his carving the air and whirling. I did enjoy his dance! --Charlie

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on November 22, 2008
David,
With superior crafting you turn a simple, everyday observation into a meaningful lasting poem; have to comment on "a mythic god when alone"...how fine that is!
This work endures.
John


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