Braille (poem) by Edwin Hurdle on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on March 3, 2010

IN A SITUATION LIKE THIS...THE ONLY THING TO DO IS...BACK UP UNTIL THE OTHER PARTY REGAINS THEIR 'SIGHT'. OTHERWISE, YOU'LL FIND YOURSELF 'BLIND'...LIKE HER. FANTASTIC WORK WITH A DYNAMIC MESSAGE. THANKS, EDWIN AND BLESSINGS. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)

Reviewed on December 19, 2009

Strong writing, with a dynamic punch at the close! Loved the ending so much, but getting there was half the fun! Thanks by the way, for the kind review of In Group We Trust. Nice of you to drop by for a visit.

-Roger

Reviewed by Sandra Corona

Reviewed on December 2, 2009

Love is blind and reason has no meaning to the heart.

If you wrote this to a particular lady, I hope she seriously considered your plea as an alternative :).

Write on!
Sandy

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on November 1, 2009

Talk about a Knight in Shining Armor! Far too many women have had their bodies and spirits pummeled to bits. It takes a love like you describe to bring one back to life. The empathy with which you write and the love that shines through every word are wonderful to see. Do mean s e e. I N S P I R I N G !!!! With gratitute, respect, and affection, 'Pea'

Reviewed by Terry Robertson

Reviewed on October 31, 2009

This is great! Love takes many roads, wrong turn and it is abusive. Nice imagery, Edwin.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on October 29, 2009

offer her the vision of truths Edwin...
Some simply cannot see...
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie

Reviewed by Zahra V (Reader)

Reviewed on October 29, 2009

Very outspoken of you Edwin. Sometimes we need to hear the truth and sometimes when you are in a situation, you are incapable of seeing it!

Zahra V

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 25, 2009

This is moving and meaningful, Edwin. I pray that only good will come of your aspirations. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on October 23, 2009

awwwwwwwww
loved the ending.........this is priceless.....what a heart you have...:)
I hope you win :)

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings

Reviewed on October 23, 2009

"Braille" words of depth very profound and also
true! Well Edwin you have done it again powerful
excellent write! Be encouraged and keep on sharing
your gift with the world, what a blessing you are!

Much Love
Always!!

Reviewed by kg cummings

Reviewed on October 22, 2009

only the blind couldn't see the feeling behind these words. very good work. Hugs, Kathy

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

beautiful appeal yes i agree with ET Waldron

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

This is surely a powerful appeal, Edwin!
I hope she responds favorably!Excellent poem!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on October 20, 2009

Heartfelt touching write....I pray all works out
Christine

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on October 20, 2009

"Right on Target" Edin!

JMD

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on October 20, 2009

Sounds like this lady needs a real man to take care of her and you could fill the order Edwin.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on October 20, 2009

Edwin,
Strong and fine writing.

John

Reviewed by Bennett Kremen

Reviewed on October 20, 2009

It's a mystery sure enough why people give and accept abuse. Using blindness to explain it makes sense. Take care,
Ben K

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on October 20, 2009

Edwin, this is a great little love story, well told.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Michael Jones

Reviewed on October 20, 2009

Hi Edwin sounds like a man in love that needs to tell that woman so. A good love story. Peace!!!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 20, 2009

Very moving and would be a hard offer for most women to turn down in that situation...sadly all too many don't see the abuse they accept.
fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 20, 2009

Many are in need of a white cane for their emotional lives, going around blindingly hurting the real blind that can see.
A kind heart will no see lifeless eyes, it will go beyond it, immersing himself in the deeps of Adrian's heart...

Georg