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Open Your Envelope
by Edwin Hurdle → (All Poetry by Edwin Hurdle)
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Seal tight
Shut down
Close off in front of everybody
Fear of judgments
Fear of reaction
Fear of not being understood
Dont feel scare
Dont feel ashame
Dont feel embarass
Release your sadness
Release your anger
Open your envelope
Share your heart
Share your mind
Share whats inside of you
You deserve help
You deserve comfort
You deserve light to push darkness away
Look deep into my eyes
Tell me whats wrong
Tell me whats bothering you
Dont feel scare
Dont feel ashame
Dont feel embarass
Release your addictions
Release your problems
Open your envelope
Share your heart
Share your mind
Share whats inside of you
Do yoga with your voice
Stretch your feelings all the way out
You will be heard loud and clear
Any day,any night
Any time will not be wasted
It will be useful to make you better
Open your envelope
Share your heart
Share your mind
Share whats inside of you

 

Copyright(c)2009 Edwin Hurdle

 


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 Reviews of "Open Your Envelope"
Reviewed by Steve Ralph
Reviewed on October 29, 2011
excellent advice, and well written, thanks for sharing.
Regards, Steve

Reviewed by Ahmad Saqer
Reviewed on October 10, 2011
very nice

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on May 25, 2011
This was fantastic! I had to read it twice, just excellent writing my friend. Man, plaster this one on a billboard!!! Perfection of life right here. I loved it!

Kim
(V)

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2010
Wonderful writing sweet man..stay safe and well..Hugss

Reviewed by Victoria Lane (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2010
How can one resist sharing after reading this?! lol- it's wonderful for someone to be so interested in hearing the deepest thoughts of another. I enjoyed this. Best to you Edwin :)

Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo
Reviewed on June 21, 2010
This write is inspirational and has a good message but it doesn't read like a poem to me or have smooth flow. Sorry.

Lena

Reviewed by Anna Glymph
Reviewed on June 16, 2010
Wow......that is well written Edwin

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on March 10, 2010
We all need each other

great write!

Pierre

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 25, 2010
Wise write, Edwin!

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on January 11, 2010
A hearfelt poem. We all need to open our envelopes from time to time. Wonderful thoughts!

Reviewed by Jolynne Hudnell
Reviewed on January 3, 2010
Wonderfully expressed. I like how you used short succinct phrases for simplicity, but upon deeper inspection, the phrases blend together for more complex thought and feeling. I can relate to so much of this. In fact, I am currently in the process of opening my envelope. Thank you!

Reviewed by Barbara Alfaro (Reader)
Reviewed on December 15, 2009
Positive thoughts, well expressed.

Reviewed by Mary Coe
Reviewed on December 14, 2009
Well penned.

Reviewed on December 11, 2009
very inspiring verse to ponder, cheers

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on December 2, 2009
THIS IS A POWERFUL METAPHORIC WORK. ONE WILL FIND THAT A 'SEEMINGLY' EASY TASK OF OPENING THEIR 'ENVELOPE'...IS NOT EASY AT ALL. THANKS FOR SHARING EDWIN, AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 24, 2009
It is true that many of us keep everything hidden "inside the envelope," Edwin. Nicely done. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on November 22, 2009
personalities are mostly sealed envelopes -- even those we classify as extroverts -- absolute openness is very difficult to achieve -- the vulnerability that results leaves most mortals feeling very insecure -- a thought provoking message written with great expertise Edwin -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 16, 2009
Wise words, Edwin. Well done.

Reviewed on November 16, 2009
I am an open envelope now for sure!
Signed & Delivered :)
Peace & Inspirations
Vickie

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 16, 2009
Many a man can be considered a sealed envelope, perhaps they should follow your advice and open the lid and show what they are.

Georg



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