If you can figure out where this came from, I am sure you should be a poetry critic. Only I could write crap like this and not remember doing it. At least I learned a new word.
What bellwether swipes the season?
Constantly
Consistently
Stealing saleable seconds
Steady in pace
And song incessant
Yelling, disturbing, and nothing else.
Sonic beats and rhythms
Assaulting peace
Grainy energetic clones
Dance most tirelessly
Stealing my time
Who leads the thief?
In my direction
Yielding this confusion.
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Reviews of "Bellwether"
Reviewed by Walter Smith III (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2005
good poem. seems the confusion makes you think more about it to try and figure it out. keeps the poem on the mind. sure is a long way from mud and barefeet.
This programmed, self-paced lesson focuses exclusively on the use of postpostions (ga and (w)o) with grammatical objects in the Japanese language without wavering or getting off track in the labyrinth of Japanese syntax and other grammatical issues.
enjoyed the flow and confusion
is one of the best feelings to write
or write about
we all been there!!!
enjoy this, truly
M.Rose
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