Age of Puberty (Haiku) (poem) by Sheri C. Uy on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 24, 2010

Sheri, as the John Melenchamp(?) song proclaims, "someday soon, changes gonna be comin 'rond make us all women and men" -- as you elude to, "clear serene waters --hold a mystery within" -- much peace and love to you my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on March 3, 2008

Sheri, these pieces are outstanding! Perfect in form, great imagery and metaphor.

Reviewed by Jerry Engler

Reviewed on January 24, 2008

Very beautiful and well-done analogy. I liked it very much...Jerry

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

Shery, I joined a few month earlier than you. I decided that I can learn a lot from you especialy the haiku's. Very nice thak you for sharing. Emile

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

Soothing and peaceful
The age of puberty sounds like a teenager
like the tides struggling to free out
Of puberty and forcing the teen
To adult hood
Beautifully written Haiku
Love Peace and Hugssss....Morning Star

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

nicely developed haiku ...

Reviewed by M. Rafferty (Reader)

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

Soothing and full of wonderful meanings...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

High tides, low tides, calm waters, raging waters....

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

I do appreciate the metaphorical tone of these haiku. Well done, Sheri. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Jean Pike

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

I don't know a lot about this poetry form, Sheri, but this has a nice, soothing feel to it. I enjoyed it.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Like the raging tides beating against a thick wall of rocks! Very descriptive and creative...

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Beautiful writes both
most enjoyable kus
Peace & Love Be with you

William

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Gotta love it!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

love them..
Have a happy day!
Ron

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Powerfully penned, Sheri.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Sheri this is excellent,, It portrays perfectly with a great understanding of a teenager going through the process of becoming an adult...
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

I can see an expression of balance that you seem to suggest in this fine write that puberty and coming of age is also such a wonderfully romantic awakening of the senses. Enjoyed...

Fee

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

You nailed that one my friend! Beautifully done my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Sheri,

The power of mysteries, of passion awakening, in perfect haiku form. Breathtaking!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Sheri,

Very well written my friend. As they say,"time and tides wait for no one." Pardon the pun but it flowed perfectly. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Beautiful... "Age of Puberty (Haiku)" has delivered a poetic bouquet.

I salute You, Poet.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Wonderful write, Sheri; brava! Seems that kids are hitting puberty younger and younger nowadays; that's scary!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :)

Reviewed by T. Schwimmer (Reader)

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

You leave me breathless with this one, Sheri. The hidden red hot passions of youth. Well expressed in six wonderful lines!

Best wishes,
Tanya

Reviewed by Andrew Grover (Reader)

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Great ku, Sheri. Exhilarating!

Yours,
AJ Grover

Reviewed by Regino Gonzales, Jr.

Reviewed on January 3, 2008

"Secrets of the sea". What a subtle and artistic way to describe the emotions of a woman-to-be. Very nice my dear!

Sincerely,

Regino

Reviewed by E. Richardson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 3, 2008

Outstanding haiku, Sheri. The human feelings do hold these kind of intense emotions especially during the teen-age years. Well done!