Excellent, Leann! Within these three lines lies an awful truth...skillfully written. Your words convey that silken allure with which the deceiver works.
Gina
Reviewed by susan abulhawa (Reader)
Reviewed on April 27, 2008
lies and silken-smooth thread...perfect! i appreciate the way you suffuse physical objects with the intangible.
Intense and thought stirring for sure, I read this several times and each time I became more impressed by the sincerity and simplicity of this piece. Very well done.
Short and to the point, but spun with perfect truth.
I, also, have a poem about deceit... entitled Honey...mine is longer, but it talks about those sticky silky threads just the same. :~)
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
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Karen
I, also, have a poem about deceit... entitled Honey...mine is longer, but it talks about those sticky silky threads just the same. :~)
Cryssa