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The Simile of Life
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The Simile of Life

 

 

 

 

My mother gave me some advice
When I was ruddy, young and nice,
And I will do my best to say
To you the things she said that day.

"My son," she said, "please do come here.
"I've something quite important, dear.
"Please do your best to try to hear.

"For time is short,
And life is brief
Like colors in the autumn leaf,
Like cool ice melting in the sun,
Like snags upon a nylon run,
Like grade-school children having fun,
Like games and contests you have won,
Like homework you know must be done,
Like ham between a French-bread bun,
Like bullets in a gangster's gun,
Like elephants that weigh a ton,
Like ray-guns that are set for stun..."

She stopped here ‘cause I had to sneeze,
And I said, "Mother, will you please
Bring this story to a close?
"I really have to blow my nose!"

But she looked quite amazed at me,
And shouted in a gentle plea,
"That's what I've tried to make you see.

"That time is quick,
And life is fast
Like autographs upon a cast,
Like eating food and getting sick,
Like chewing on an ice cream stick,
Like blowing out a candle wick,
Like blood from off a cut you lick,
Like denting things with just a kick,
Like hens who'll never have a chick,
Like strings on banjos that you pick,
Like chocolate shakes so sweet and thick,
Like prostitutes that turn a trick,
Like broken clocks that never tick..."

 Just then I sneezed a second time,
But understood her tale of thyme.
For all you touch and all you see
Is all your life will ever be.
So everything we hear and taste
Should not be done in rush or haste,
And suddenly my second sneeze
Had meaning with the best of these.

 


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 Reviews of "The Simile of Life"
Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2008
Modern Day Proverbs..........great read. Deborah

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on March 11, 2008
Lighthearted, yet profound, well written piece.

Axilea

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on March 11, 2008
Loved the rhythm in this, it left me breathless.

Janet xoxoxo

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 11, 2008
Just a tasty, easy, breezy, read. I remember leaving my mother's bountiful table where I inhaled food, to college where I had no money and was training for wrestling savoring the flavor of every morsel I was able to buy.

Reminds me of a poem that I wrote, called "Simile."

Ron

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on March 10, 2008
Love this!!! What a wonderful little lesson wrapped up perfectly neatly in a well-written and timed poem, its humor the bow on top! Blessing, Michelle

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
...well written poetry...moments realized...not to be missed perhaps...within a sneeze.
excellent Scott...
John

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
I love it, Scott! It reminds me of "You are old, Father William, the young man said..." or "I saw him sitting on a gate"... Very Carrollesque. And the image of the sneeze was awesome. (see my "You Call?") There's a large contrast between this poem and your "Psalm of Death"-- which I thought was going to be a foil for Longfellow's "Psalm of Life" which I love, and memorized when I was about 13 or so... However, I love yours as is.

Take care. --Charlie

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
Excellent writing Scott,enjoyed very much..take care OK...Hugsss

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
Scott,
Your mother was a very wise woman. Time passes so quickly and sometimes, we allow ourselves to become so busy that we fail to stop and appreciate the simple moments we should not miss.
I enjoyed this very well written poem very much.

Thanks,
Jill


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