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Skip Me Along the Water
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Rated "G" by the Author.

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a bourbon afternoon skipping stones and tomes
I am a stone a flat stone a smooth stone carved by the waves Skip me along the water count the skips. Over four is good Fool the fish who try to catch me, smack�em on the fishlip on the fourth bounce fool the fish, fish the fool out of water out of sun raisins in the moon with cheese on the side Epilogue - A poet�s tale: I�ll pretend to write while you pretend to like

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Reviews of "Skip Me Along the Water"

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 12, 2004

I do like it. It makes me think. Love and peace to you, Andrew. Regis

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 31, 2004

Most of the writes I comment on, I do enjoy.....
Thanks for your comment on the sketch

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

This was quite the image! I enjoyed the fun in it! Lisa

Reviewed by Aamie Burnley

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

A fanciful tale that grows more delightful with each read, but I dont play pretend anymore. :)

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

raisins in the moon
with cheese on the side

--love these lines.

Reviewed by Ann Piatt

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

hahaha. I don't know if i should have laughed or not...but the ending was humorous to me...so often how i feel about my own writing. This was good stuff...and i like the idea of being a flat stone skipping across the water...what a ride that would be!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 20, 2004

I do like;-)! Good to read you, it's been a long time!

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