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embracing Tuesday
by Andrew Rafalski → (All Poetry by Andrew Rafalski)
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the week -- in reverse and passion

I embraced Tuesday
into the murky depths
of concrete eyes
after suffering Monday
drifting to submerged mistakes
losses and cries
and fondling Sunday sublime
with my long distance lover
howling for the duties of Saturday
remembering the trysts of Friday
following the depths of Thursday
oh stab me and drive me
to go
to tick
and die
on Wednesday

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 Reviews of "embracing Tuesday"
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
agree with JudaAce
this is well coined!!!
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 9, 2004
you need an eight day week to keep a long distance lover satisfied ...

very well crafted ...
Reviewed by Ann Piatt
Reviewed on August 8, 2004
I love this write, Andrew! Your use of language here is nothing short of perfect for this write. It packs the right kind of punch and even in its brevity...it feels like taking a trip with someone...a fast and furious one, no less.

Very nicely done!

Ann
Reviewed by Aamie Burnley
Reviewed on August 8, 2004
This is a nifty turn of words. I really like the repitition of rhythm and how the tempo picks up at the end.
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