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Living Near the Tracks
by Andrew Rafalski → (All Poetry by Andrew Rafalski)
  
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For a year, recently, I lived in a house that stood about a hundred feet from a railroad track.




And while the day outside awaits,
the train runs with too much
sympathetic frequency.
Sympathetic frequency brings down bridges.
The house shakes, the cheap clock ticks,
the lamp vibrates.
I hope the foundation holds.
Hope mine holds.

Life is like a crib cage.
You can crawl around but you can’t get out.
The bars will stop you.
And if you escape…
Life is also an escape until you’re captured again.
I’ve escaped several times.
Each time I’m captured again,
roped into school, the Army, a wife, a job,
living in houses next to the track.
Life has many cops waiting to catch you if you step out line,
get out of your crib cage.

Of course
you could keep escaping
and be wily and avoid capture,
a truant for life become invisible.
Avoid the bars, frequent the bars.

But then you’ll be on the outside looking in
…again

Writing on the wall

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 Reviews of "Living Near the Tracks"
Reviewed by Robin Spicer
Reviewed on November 24, 2003
We all feel trapped at times, and yes would that i could escape. Alas do we not make our own Bars?
Well done
Robin

Reviewed by Aamie Burnley
Reviewed on November 22, 2003
... this evokes nice train memories, and the notion of trains running "with too much sympathetic frequency" is delightfully original; however, i think the beginning could be stronger: the
"and" implies that i have missed something, and i dont see a correlation between the trains and the crib cage stanza.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
For several years as I grew up I lived in a shack by the railroad track so I can relate. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
Or you can ride the rails again, out to California, looking for gold, panning in the stream, hoping to recapture your soul. Good write!


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