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LYRICS....YOU COULD HAVE JUST SAID NO
by Stephen W. Pollard → (All Poetry by Stephen W. Pollard)
Wednesday, March 30, 2022    Rated "G" by the Author.
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My poem "Lyrics....You Could Have Just Said No" is about a fellow who thought that a woman who he liked was perfect for him only to find out that it was not the case.

 "LYRICS....YOU COULD HAVE JUST SAID NO"

 

I thought that we were

Made for one another

I took an interest in you

And was polite to you

 

But you were just so tense

It was like a rock hit me

For me it made great sense

But i felt like you socked me

And you gave me a black eye

You could not care if I died

 

I was just wanting to be close

But then you just stuck up your nose

Life with you could have been grand

But felt like that I was slammed

 

There was no doubt about it

Felt your total derision

It's no getting around it

You showed total revulsion

 

You could have just said no 

And that could have been the end

But you had to put on a show

And made a scene in the end

 


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 Reviews of "LYRICS....YOU COULD HAVE JUST SAID NO"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 4, 2022
Sad but not an uncommon case in this world/life. Take care, Stephen. You might want to change the "x" to an "s" in the last line.

Regis 😎🍁

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 31, 2022
Songs usually rhyme and are more lyrical. There is no "hook" that is repeated helping someone remember the song after listening to it for the first time. And, of the rejection songs like those classic ones by Roy Orbison have some redeeming value like, "Pretty Woman." At the end of the song, she comes "walking back" to him.

Ron

Reviewed on March 31, 2022
Some women like to put on a show to get attention from everyone. Men should know better. Nice poem!

Sandie


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