You captured fear in a very deep and chilling way Tracey!
the uncontrolled kind! fear can be friendly if it alerts
us to something not good. But not the kind you write of!
Superb poem!
Eileen
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 15, 2006
Gotta love it. Fear. You paint a fabulous mind-photo of what fear is. I wrote about in recently also, it is still listed on my poetry site if ya wanna take a look. Good poetry.
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the uncontrolled kind! fear can be friendly if it alerts
us to something not good. But not the kind you write of!
Superb poem!
Eileen
Very well done Tracey!!
Love Tinka
I felt every syllable of this write! Being a stormphobic, you capture the white hot intensity of blind panic...thank you, someone DOES understand! Excellent work--applause! DEFINATELY saving this one.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.