Straddling a log
at the foot of the sea
sun shinning bright
gentle breeze
it's tingling up my spine
water kissing my knees
today I'm happy
Loooking into the water
I feel at ease
the reflections on the waves
smile back at me
I think she's looking pretty
sweet
cause today I'm happy
Life's hard sometimes
especially when your wings
won't fly
weighing heavy there's so much
shit
on your mind
and to reach the mountain top
you gotta climb
but today I'm happy
Fingertips in the water
I give her a push
and send her off with
much luck
and you across the sea
recieve me and you
pick me up
taking on a task that'll
make you and me
happy
With skillful strokes
of your pencil
you transform space
filling it up with the
reflection that graced
the water that day
and made me just
smile away
I saw it and was happy
Thank you Ron Axeson for the sketch your the man
and Eileen I have the perfect song for you
"Don't Look Back" by Dave Koz
wonderful advice from Trask
thanks for helping to make me Happy
~~~~~~smile~~~~~~
You can see that sometimes it is nice to take a little break from the realities of the world. And that is when it makes these kind of poems even more appreciated. You deserve that kind of happiness and no less.
I know I rarely ever comment on a personal level but today is an exception. Even though it is still a great write! Peace and happiness!!! My wish to you. :)
Amor
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on July 11, 2002
Enjoyed the great writing--and Ron did a great sketch, too!
This Touched me to tears!!!
I could feel the light hearted joy in your words!
Excellent!!
And I loved your notes at the end!!
All wonderful beautiful people!! *S*
~Jen
Reviewed by Scada (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2002
Sounds like you're doing well Mitzi, glad to hear it, you're one of my favorites.
Scada
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2002
You deserve this happinessMitzi! Cherish it and hold it to your bossom as long as you can. When I think of this happiness, the name of the song "My Sweet Love" comes to mind. Do you remember that? Bill Hugs xoxoxo
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Happiness is relative. You've captured the concept well.
love & kisses
auntie Elaine
I know I rarely ever comment on a personal level but today is an exception. Even though it is still a great write! Peace and happiness!!! My wish to you. :)
Amor
Whence I Am Alone, I Find Myself, I Find Peace,I Find Happiness, Because I Found Me, My Self!
In All Pain In This World If Only More People Would Learn To Care,i.e. They'd (Find)Believe They Just Helped Themselves Then & Again___
Just a little Act of Kindness goes a long,long,way, Simply because you think kind thought's of that (those) person(s) Brings
Happiness! Thanks!!
TRASK
A Quote In My Books:
Deny The Soul What It Needs & Your Mind Becomes Sick...
All Thing's, Being's Are Entwined, Think Kind
Thought's, It Comes Back To You In Same, All Everybody!!
This felt like a happy song to my heart...:)
Great write...
Yep, Ron is man alright.
I love how he did your
sketch.... :)
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
hugs,
Chris
debby
josie
people make pleasure
god makes happiness they say
god bless this that is yours
enjoyed the shots babe
I could feel the light hearted joy in your words!
Excellent!!
And I loved your notes at the end!!
All wonderful beautiful people!! *S*
~Jen
Scada