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The Perfect Wave

by Kalikiano Kalei — Read all 118 poems by Kalikiano Kalei

Surfing can be a fearful, frightening activity or it can be a wildly liberating experience, depending substantially upon our subjective quotient of personal courage and how inertially challenging the waves are that we have chosen to prove ourselves on. If the ocean is regarded as the mother of all life, the potential release one acquires from a wave can be a cathartic form of agapean love--unless it transmutes itself into a darker form of oedipal, erotic desire to become one again with one's alluring matriarchal source.

Sunday, February 10, 2008


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The Perfect Wave
 

 
 



Undulations of the Mother Womb

Sinuating, slithering liquid contractions

Roll towards us as we sit upon our boards,

Just beyond the shore break’s outer edge.


The water warm, a placental broth,

Supports us, as forsaken creatures of the land:

Uncertain prodigal spawn evolved through

Many patient millennial epochs.


The rhythmic sweep of steaming crests ignores us

Rushing ponderously by to crash in frenzied spray

Upon the pyroclastic lava of the shore that sits

Impervious to all but the progeny of eternity.


To sit so, floating out at sea, the smallest mote,

The merest, smallest speck of fragile, sea-borne matter,

Is to grasp the most rudimentary insight into life,

That all our human fears are groundless.


The brilliant flash of hope-filled faith,

That Mother’s fluidic coital, sine-like spasms

Will never end, bears us up with reckless belief

That all Her waves are sublimely perfect.


Just at that moment coincident, it seems,

The green mountains moving under us finally

Grasp our bodies, furiously sucking us up

Towards our respective unknown destinies.


Borne high on anxious, colossal liquid towers

Rising far above translucent walls of streaming spume,

That moment of briefest immortality we seek

Occurs and ends again, but also lasts forever.
 

 



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Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 21, 2010
Awesome. This is my favorite of all your works.

Reviewed by Kalikiano Kalei
Reviewed on October 8, 2010
Just in case anyone is wondering about the use of the term 'shore break' in this piece, the beach in reference is Makaha. One other point to clarify: Finally found out that the radiantly smiling wahine shown in the image I chose to accompany this is none other than Pamela Clark, whom I hope will (continue to) allow me to grace this with her he'e nalu presence! Aloha mai e; e malhalo, Pam!
-Kalikiano

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on May 26, 2009
Wow! Awesome write....You took me there..exhilarating,exciting, like I imagine surfing must feel.

Anna

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on April 11, 2009
Beauty!!

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on January 17, 2009
I like the sustained central metaphor and vivid images. Good poem.

Reviewed by Clifford Kapono
Reviewed on January 3, 2009
Sounds like an ode to body surfing shore break to me. Next time get outside where the surf is designed to bring you in contact with the universe feel its power in the belly of a monstrous wave at Pipe or back side Halawa Valley, a big right at Honoloa Bay or backdoors at Honolii in Hilo. Got wax?

Reviewed on February 29, 2008
Does body surfing count? LOL Never have tried a board or been brave enough to try the really big waves, but oh, this looks inviting - excellent, Kine!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Branch Isole (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
every sportsman will declare of his passion "a bad day of
(fill in the blank) is better than a good day at work" however,
Da Kine know the truth.
A Hui Hou-

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 16, 2008
When I used to surf (long board 10.1, Heritage) I found that one great ride was enough to keep me going till the next time I went out...as i get older however I am unable, with two herniated discs and multiple lower body injuries and pain, to go out like I used to, but I can still watch and recall all those great rides in my youth...Peace thru Surfing...Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 11, 2008
I'll take the "wild, liberating experience" as the sense of oneness and freedom is immense, well said....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on February 10, 2008
Many speculations on John Milton and William Shakespeare's superb lexicon of over thirty-five thousand words each ~ didn't impress me, because I can read any one of them without stop for words.

I wish that those that affirmed that the two great Masters had such vocabulary would visit Your Den for a heedful reading of Your literary samples.

"The Perfect Wave" has paid its poetical dues to the department of treasury of Poetry.

Thank You for adding value to LITERATURE, and for enriching The American Fine Letters.

In reverent admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
...great force penned here...of one who accepts the challenges...of one Mother's strength...above waters eternal movement.
excellent write...
John

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
Oh yes,well done...HUgsssss


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