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· Coruscated Confabulations: Oh! The Humanity!

· Marooned on Moloka'i: Coconuts, Dreams & Death

· Saunas and War Toys

· Falling Off the Mountain (poems)

· Santa Cruz Sargasso, Berkeley Fog (poems)

· U S Chemical and Biological Defense Respirators


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· A Plethora of Papas

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· The Saint Valentine's Day Mass Accretion (a short story)

· Everything you know is wrong...(part II)

· Everything you know is wrong...(part1)

· An Arrow for Amaterasu

· Outdoor Bob and the leaf-blower from Hell...


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· And now a word from Our Heavenly Host...

· Joseph Pujol, Le Petomane, star of the Moulin Rouge (1887)

· NorCal Coastal Cold Water Reflections, 1989/2007

· The Gold and Azure Frontier

· We the Pimples... (or) a Child's Garden of Constitutional Verses...

· Welcome to Californication, suckers!

· Confessions of a 'Yellow Fever' afflictee...


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· Find her in everything...

· Petrushka's Remorseful 5-Year Plan...

· The starward path: A tribute to Laika and Gagarin

· Hair today, groan tomorrow...comrade

· Merely a turn of the wheel...

· Crush depth

· The Doorway, twixt Heaven and Hell...

· Puddle Worms

· Happy Saint Valentine's Day Mass Accretion

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· Local Writer Not Slated to Receive Steinbeck Foundation Recognition

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Falling Off the Mountain

by Kalikiano Kalei — Read all 118 poems by Kalikiano Kalei

The allegorical mountain may be harder to climb and summit than any geophysical mass of volcanic or tectonic earthen crust. Sometimes, when the question is called high up on some ferociously tenuous perch, a climber is confronted squarely by the aggregate of his worst fears...only to realise in an epipheny of wry logic that 'falling' isn't really something to fear at all; gravity, on the other hand, is a legitimate source of serious a priori concern! With this in mind, herewith follows a Zen koan for your reflective rumination.

Tuesday, February 12, 2008


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Falling Off the Mountain:
The Mountain Koan


 

You can’t fall off a mountain.

It’s not something you would notice

While clinging to that ledge up there,

But carefully consider: You really can’t!

 

Where does a mountain begin?

Where does it end? At which altitude does

It start? How deep do its roots reach?

How broad is its circumference?

 

When we tightly close our eyes

Does any mountain cease to exist?

How far do we need to travel from it

Before we have actually left it?

 

When you finish climbing a route

Does the mountain disappear?

When we travel away from it,

Do we take any of it with us?

 

As your weary fingers peel off

The little ‘nothing’ holds high up

The face, as gravity makes you slip,

Are you falling off the mountain? No!

 

When we start toward the summit

Does the mountain take us with it?

Think hard about it; no matter how hard

You try, you can’t fall off a mountain!


 
 
 
 
 
 
 



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Reviewed by Lloyd Lofthouse
Reviewed on August 15, 2008
I've hiked/climbed to the top of many mountains--breathless; heart beating at over ten thousand feet above sea level. Yes, I see from your poem that we can't fall off a mountain. We can fall or drop or roll to another part ofthe mountain. What happens if we fell toward the moon from a mountain--impossible but metaphorically maybe not?

Reviewed on February 13, 2008
Deeply thought provoking, I enjoyed this one - if you can't fall off a mountain, what do you fall from? Excellent -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
Profound thought... This one will have me thinking for a little while. I think maybe it is like the string of the kite holding the kite up...

Going to think some more...
Cryssa

Reviewed on February 12, 2008

Intriguing composition... "Falling Off the Mountain" strikes the dynamo of the mind.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
When presented as the mountain continues below the surface of the earth - you can't fall off a mountain. You have given me a lot to think about. In what other areas of my life can I use this?

God bless you. Kathy


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