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My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
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Nancy
The air was still but the sounds were loud.
I kept focus as my strides were steady.
With shaking hands and weak knees I stood.
My eyes blurred as I looked down.
Darkness surrounded me as whites and satins lay before me.
I inhaled strong scents and opened my eyes to paleness.
Excellent words here
o, i felt this one deep in my soul--heartmoving, wonderfully written
i particularly love the line, "inhaled strong scents and opened my eyes to paleness."
well done!
BTW, welcome to AD, we're family here! :) stop by anytime!
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)