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Moonwish (sequel)
by Diana Wiles → (All Poetry by Diana Wiles)
Tuesday, October 18, 2016    Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Moonwish girl and handsome Lad with forehead curl...can they commit to everlasting love, or will their cravings for adventure lead them elsewhere?...

 Moonwish (sequel)

The girl she had been wandering
Of pleasure had her fill,
She now was searching just for love,
A man to fit the bill.
No need for tastes of Moonwish
To lure him to her side,
She just would be 'au naturel'
Green eyes were open wide...
She saw him from a distance,
She knew he had been sent,
By Universal Consciousness
To see her in her tent!
He parted silken hangings,
Sure of what he'd see,
Then spied our girl
Green eyes aglow,
About to drink Green Tea...
Their gazes met
Their Hearts entwined
Her beauty rare
Just blew his mind.
The magic of the night begun,
Celestial rain and rainbow fun..
He took her hand
She shivered,
Their cups did overflow,
With purest love and innocence,
He knew he loved her so.
She told him of her nightly games,
Was honest from the start,
He told her he had played the field,
But now they'd never part...
The girl he saw within his dreams
He'd searched for night and day,
Moonwish girl with flowing hair
He'd heard the story say..
"Search for the girl
With greenest eyes
And you will have the highest prize."
He knew he had been lucky,
To find this lovely girl,
To woo her with his handsome face
And cutest forehead curl-
She too became besotted,
No other caught her eye,
Her Heart was won by handsome Lad,
To him she'd never lie..
But all too soon she craved again
The wonders of the night,
To savour handsome males again,
To visit Stars so bright.
One night she crept out after dark,
When Lover was 'flat out',
And slipped into alluring dress
And on her lips a pout.
She felt the thrill within her rise,
Just as she had before,
Out to net a tasty fish
And let him taste of her Moonwish.....
The night was warm
Her Heart beat fast,
She spied her dish
Her net was cast..
To favourite spot on Milky Way
She drew him to her close,
Of Moonwish Goblet's sweet Liqueur
She gave him double dose.
Relaxation, colours bright
Free from cares, 
Just sheer delight...
Ecstatic pleasures drew them in,
No conscience of her Night of Sin.
Entwined they lay in warm embrace,
The deed now it was done,
She had betrayed her Lover dear
For one fast night of fun-
She crept back sad with soft lament,
And entered now their darkened tent,
Scared of what to tell her man,
She hid her face beneath lace fan...
She drew apart diaphanous silks
And entered through to see,
Her handsome Love
Moonwish in hand
With girl upon his knee!
He kissed and stroked quite unaware
Of Moonwish girl who stood and stared..
His hands were deft,
The girl she sighed,
And Moonwish girl
Sank down and cried.
She knew they were a pair alike,
And through the Stars
They liked to hike...
Pleasure seekers of the First Degree
Who needed to be fast and free.
Not for them to settle down 
And raise three kids
And live in Town...
The Universe was theirs to play, 
Just fun, fun, fun,
Fun all the way!
So the moral of this tale could be -
Stay in your tent 
And drink Green Tea..
Leave all your Moonwish days behind,
And to your handsome man be kind - 
Just shower him lots with 
love and kisses...
To keep away those flighty Misses.....


Diana Wiles October, 2016


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 Reviews of "Moonwish (sequel)"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on October 13, 2022
HMMMM...SEEMS NONE ARE HARDLY ABLE TO TAKE WHAT THEY GIVE, WHEN IT COMES TO ONE ADHEREING FAITHFULLY TO 'TREASURE' WHICH FATE HAS RENDERED...AS A GIFT. SO I WOULD HAVE TO AGREE. INSTEAD OF SURRENDERING TO TEMPTATION OF 'MORE HONEY' ON A GREENER TREE, ONE WOULD BE WISE TO TEND THE TREE THEY ALREADY HAVE AND...LET IT BE. '...I AM THE LORD THEY GOD, I AM A JEALOUS GOD...', AMEN. ENJOYED, THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Poets Soul
Reviewed on July 2, 2022
Usually the sequel is not as good as the original, but this one was better. The twist and turns ended with an unexpected ending. I"ll stick with the green tea I believe.

PS

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2016
Love this story poem...,"Pleasure seekers of the First Degree...the words, emotions, all come together, Diana!

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by CHANTI LACE
Reviewed on October 21, 2016
Wow magical...xo

Reviewed by David Thompson
Reviewed on October 21, 2016
When I read pieces such as "Moonwish" and "Moonwish (Sequel)," they cause me to remember just how learnéd you are in the study of poetry, accompanied by the skill of writing it as well. I have read this several times already, and I simply marvel each time with its rhythm, rhyme, and its musical qualities. You have a unique talent, Diana, something I have tried on occasion, but soon put it aside, along with the defeated realization that I am out of my league, attempting to reach for the stars when only treetops are my limit. So here I sit...waiting for your next gem to come my way...filling me with both appreciation and envy. And I ask forgiveness for the latter. 👏👏👏

Love,

David

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 20, 2016
While not quite epic, it was long. Yet as I read, it was fast-paced and very easy to read making the length just right for your purpose and wonderfully rhymed.

As for the subject, I loved it. Especially the part about both of them being free to roam and enjoy without having guilt and anger or jealousy to enter in to their relationship. So when you put the moral at the end it kind of put a damper on my thinking.

Ron

Reviewed on October 19, 2016
Fantastic! This is epic! I was "in" the world that your imagery projected. The moral is the kicker!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on October 19, 2016
Romantic and beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on October 19, 2016
Diana~
Delightful the romantic magic of your verses. Fine writing.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on October 18, 2016
This is a great rhymer, Diana, and a fast-paced in and out of love poem. I like it a lot, but I'm still working on "besotted" and "diaphanous silks." Are these traps that you Brits set for the unwary? :=)

Reviewed by J. Roseline
Reviewed on October 18, 2016
Wow Diana this is pure magical. I am sure everyone who reads this will be delighted with these beautiful verses and more so agree with you wholeheartedly... I wished to write something similar but you did it for me ... too... This fellow the moon , he is very smart.. wooing many at a time!! O men please listen!! Roseline

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 18, 2016
Mystically and romantically (sensually) engaging verses that tell a fine story, Diana. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis


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