We can become weary and worn down with all the current World problems, but balance is the key…we can still acknowledge this, whilst keeping our appreciation of beautiful and simple things that surround us…and thus our spirit is stronger…
Yes, balance is so relevant now. Hard to maintain that equilibrium, especially if you're emotional as I am. Lovely write, Diana. A pleasure to meet you.
YOU HAVE HIT THE NAIL ON ITS HEAD. FOR, IT IS THE SIMPLE, TOTALLY 'FREE THINGS' IN LIFE...THAT RENDERS THE DEEPEST AND MOST PERSEVERING STRENGTH THAT WE WILL EVER NEED TO PRESS-ON IN THIS EARTH. GOD, IN ALL HIS MAJESTY CREATED THESE MARVELOUS 'GIFTS', WHICH YOU HAVE MENTIONED, FOR US AND THEY ARE ALL AROUND. BUT, THEY ARE OURS, ONLY...IF...WE WOULD BELIEVE AND REACH TO THAT 'HIGHER PLAIN' OF FAITH, WHERE WE CAN SEE AND ENJOY THESE TREASURES. IMMENSELY INSPIRING AND THANKS FOR SHARING, DIANA. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS
This is such a lovely scene, only you can depict the balance of nature with so much harmony. Thank you for sharing such a talented pen, bless your beautiful heart :)
Simple pleasures, you speak of them so well. Gentle reminders of what is so easy to do, to laugh, enjoy life and its beauty. Minimal words with a big message of Peace.
Three things all of us can endeavor for. All humans are wired by the Creator to be loved and respected. These things are as fundamental for humans as breathing. Not only do we struggle to find (respect) love peace and harmony, but we also struggle to hold onto them when we do. A hopeful message. r
The ease with which each line flows makes this poem truly great. The poet gently enters into the disturbed world of the poem and sees so much in the temporarily undisturbed nature. There are few poems which talk of the ocean and a river together. The search for balance, peace and harmony is indicative of the maturity of the poet who can see that in the current situation these are not easy commodities to come by unless one turns to nature.
What deserves true praise in the poem is the handling of the rhyme the presence of which is scarcely felt. Hats off, Diana.
Lovely, apt, and timely... your words are encouraging, Diana. And encouragement is sorely needed these days. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
Regis. 🙏🌳💚🌲🦋
Reviewed by JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2022
Beautifully painted..Amen Diana. We all need this balance of hope, salt, peace and light. It's an unexpected season as we contend for greatness and our Heavenly Father is in charge
All one has to do is leave the house in springtime and head out to a local park to see all this soothing tranquility take place and free the spirit from all of the bad news that one hears every day. That is your theme for this poem, rightly written.
We must all remember that the news we receive, it is the worst from around the world involving a very small fraction of humanity. And when bad things happen next door or to us, to remember that they are rare and rarely will happen again, and lest we leave the circumstances that caused the problem to remain without correcting it. You have provided ways to correct our attitude with your poem.
You are so right, balance is the key and this can partially be achieved by taking notice of the beautiful and endearing things around us in the natural world. So beautifully, and succinctly expressed and such a timely message as well.
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Love it!
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What deserves true praise in the poem is the handling of the rhyme the presence of which is scarcely felt. Hats off, Diana.
Fee
Regis. 🙏🌳💚🌲🦋
" Equilibrium is the key".
If today it that were only so.
Mark
We must all remember that the news we receive, it is the worst from around the world involving a very small fraction of humanity. And when bad things happen next door or to us, to remember that they are rare and rarely will happen again, and lest we leave the circumstances that caused the problem to remain without correcting it. You have provided ways to correct our attitude with your poem.
Ron
Sandie