Working on a pipe dream... (poem) by Lavendar Jazz on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

Excellent write, Lavender!

Reviewed on April 15, 2008

Well done, Lavendar. I agree with Michelle: get it published. Gene

Reviewed on April 3, 2008

WOW, this is excellent writing, this should be published somewhere and the message should be heard, have to add this to my library for sure. Michelle

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2008

Spot on! The best life-long earnings go to those with the highest level educations, especially in medicine, engineering, and technology. Poverty-raised children will not have the money to pay for such tuitions, and will seldom win the grace of scholarships. We have a generation of students who are opting for the low-level degrees; things like dental hygienist, business management, or degrees in the arts. This will lead to lower middle-class life-long earnings, at best. Meanwhile, corporate America is feeling the strain as the colleges are failing to produce graduates to fill their vacant high-level positions. More and more, we are seeing Chinese and Indian names in American corporate positions. Your poem clearly states the reason why this is happening. Great write!

Ted

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 1, 2008

Fantatic reality/poem! This is sad truth, and you tell it well!
Thanks for sharing...

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on April 1, 2008

Excellent writing,enjoyed..stay safe and well...Hugss

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 31, 2008

Spot on excellence, Lavendar! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Gerard Gauthier (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2008

Regrettably many kids(and adults) see life in one dimension...great read...Gerard

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on March 31, 2008

You touch on a topic that I have rallied against for many years. Schools put too much emphasis on sports and not enough on studies. The ones who are hurt by this are all the children. I have nothing against sports, but am and always will be an advocate of studies first.

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on March 31, 2008

good insight to a sports world that leds many astray...tuff mom choices

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 31, 2008

Powerful point well made, Lavendar. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on March 31, 2008

Lovely story of a worried mother and a son who just won't give up and that's what dreams are made of...with a little faith, relentless dertermination he will make it, if, just if he never gives up. I believe in never quiting on your dreams but also being practical to make sure you have money to support yourself, while taking the beautiful journey that resides where the heart's passion is...