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Lonely Bird
by Lavendar Jazz → (All Poetry by Lavendar Jazz)
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Trying out a new style.

 

 
 
 
I’m a bird with a
broken wing, unable to
fly and too sad to
sing. I am a lonely bird
with a broken dream deferred
 
 
©  2008 Lavendar Jazz
 
 

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 Reviews of "Lonely Bird"
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on May 2, 2008
This is beautiful, for in its sadness, there is hope!

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on April 26, 2008
I hope this bird will have her wing fixed and find a soul mate.. Keep writing!.Blessings.......M

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on April 25, 2008
Awesome, don't know what style, but you got my heart!

Reviewed on April 23, 2008
Beautifully written... Blessings, Janice

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 23, 2008
this is a beautiful capture, Lavender J. It brings such a sorrowful poignancy and yet a resurgent optimism... that dream deferred. Birds of course, cannot stay "lonely" for long... of a feather, they flock together! And the songbird cannot stay sad for too long. The miracle is in the swiftness with which bird wings mends. At least, I certainly hope so! Thank you for this vulnerable, thoughtful piece. Kate xx

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on April 23, 2008
May this little bird be up and flying soon,, singing a song,, following a dream!!!!
Christine

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on April 23, 2008
Excellent capture, with pathos.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 23, 2008
Quite sad, but powerfully penned.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 22, 2008
Excellent! Succinct,but speaks volumes,very nicely done!

ET

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 22, 2008
Awww, sounds more like someone is so very down and needs a little TLC to be nursed back to strength and life....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on April 22, 2008
(((Lavander))),

Hope your wing mends soon - your sadness, evident in these lines born from hurt - you're in my prayers. An excellent write in few words convey the poignancy.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on April 22, 2008
Very well penned, Lavender; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on April 22, 2008
Tenderly Expressed Poem Lavender,

in the tenderness of love your wing will mend
embraced sorrows will know comforts in the heart of love
& we all shall sing

Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie

Reviewed by Gerard Gauthier (Reader)
Reviewed on April 22, 2008
This different for you, I liked it...I checked out your paintings that you posted. My favorite is the dancer great colors

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on April 22, 2008
Very nice writing sweet lady...Hugsssssssssssss

Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels
Reviewed on April 22, 2008
Nice work.....I enjoyed the read...


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