Red Bone... (poem) by Lavendar Jazz on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 26, 2008

I love how you start this off...your short description..."Brief poem about a man I almost met."...and the poem itself...leaves me to wonder so much more. Excellent writing!

Reviewed by Michael Guy

Reviewed on May 23, 2008

You sure are a master of the "short poetic observation" That's what a writer does best and it gives a real sense of reality and authority to your writing... Personally, I'm a bit of a "weed by the wall" myself. Keep up this style!

Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins

Reviewed on May 17, 2008

Some red flowers are a trick of the devil

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on May 5, 2008

Some stand out more than others .. Well said....M

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on April 30, 2008

Some men just seem to have the presence that make them stand out in a crowd. You've captured that thought in a few well-written words.

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Ahhhh. Opportunities lost. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

a man I almost me... this alone was intriguing to me

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Lovely, I like your new take on poems now, they are short and poignant!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Something draws us to another , it is great and thank you for sharing Lavendar.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Quite a captivating little poem.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

So much said in so few words - excellent, Lavendar.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Gerard Gauthier (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

There's a lot more to this small poem than meets the eye...Great Read

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

why oh why am I thinking about that big red dog?
I Need Coffee!.....
I Love Your Short Poem Jazz :)

Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

A sublime painting with the colors of the raibow of creativity.

In respect,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Oh my,,very powerful indeed..great job...take care...Hugsssss

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on April 27, 2008

sounds like a plus, very few are worth awe, many are jerks, but sometimes the jerks have a plus, that is if we can't get past the bull, which very few can, short but powerful

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on April 27, 2008

Another chance later? Hopefully.

Reviewed by Lucy Edwards (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2008

oh, wow.