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Trapped
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Words do indeed cut...

 

Trapped
 
 
I have allowed your
lexis to create hurt and form
bricks around my heart.
Tears and time have allowed for
my walls to come tumbling down.
 
 
© April 28, 2008 Lavendar-Jazz
 

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 Reviews of "Trapped"
Reviewed by The Poetess
Reviewed on January 18, 2011
Glad those tears are leaving you trapped no more. Very nice poem about healing.

Reviewed by Glenda Bixler
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
Great one! Wonderfully written!


Reviewed by C. Edgar Nolan
Reviewed on May 7, 2008
And it is time that heals all wounds--or so they tell me. Nice write.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on May 2, 2008
Excellent message...profoundly written...in so few lines.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on May 1, 2008
Lost love can break ones heart.. Somehow we have to pick up the pieces and travel on......M

Reviewed on April 30, 2008
yes time will do it if we let it, great verse to ponder my fall, if at all

Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
You have hit it on the preverbable head. Even after being hurt - time can heal some wounds.

Sanja xo

Reviewed on April 30, 2008
You're right on point about tears and time. Tears cleanse the soul and time heals the wounds. Nice

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
Lexicons will never best love from the heart. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Gerard Gauthier (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
I love this new writing style of yours...Great read Gerard

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
Thank the Lord when the time is right and those walls they do come down, blessings Holly

Reviewed by Shedding Light
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
This is great work.

Harold M. Nash

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
Profound write...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
"Walls come tumbling down" a state of mind signifying wonderful freedom. Interesting write.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
Wonderful writing sweet lady,have a wonderful and safe day...Hugsss

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 28, 2008
The message is very clear and this piece is creative and very well done....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on April 28, 2008
Very powerful poetry; meaningful and precise.

Axilea

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on April 28, 2008
Fabulous write!

Cryssa

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on April 28, 2008
This is wonderful, you are getting better and better everyday. Love this!

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Wise wonderful... "Trapped" strikes the learning mind and imagination.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on April 28, 2008
Time to bust through the walls of negativity that have held you - powerfully penned, Lavendar, well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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