This is a well-crafted poem. It is not easy to write in the form, but you have tackled it very well.
Reviewed by Clint Gaige
Reviewed on April 23, 2002
Fritz, its not bad, but for a rhyming poem there are a lot of speed bumps...ie, words that don't fit into the flow of the poem. Whenever a poem is set to rhyme it's melodic purpose is to flow from start to finish. You might want to consider losing the words with hard or extended sounds.
I also notice that some of the rhymes are a bit contrived...too easy, as a reader I was almost saying them before they even arrived, which makes it too easy to skip through the poem rather than read for meaning.
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I also notice that some of the rhymes are a bit contrived...too easy, as a reader I was almost saying them before they even arrived, which makes it too easy to skip through the poem rather than read for meaning.
Clint