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Parallel Universe
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What happens to creations destroyed by the artist before being seen by anyone?

Erased art lives in a shadow world
cut stanzas of first draft poems
digital photos deleted

like that shot of the goose at the pond
leg tumor forcing a looping gate
loser in the race for thrown bread

or ill conceived e-mails at midnight
flawed judgments consigned to nether worlds
excised at the speed of light.

Yet these rejections reconvene
a caucus of radical delegates
to a conference of unelected

freak art

rewoven

into a Joseph’s robe of many colors
more felt than heard or seen.

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Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on November 28, 2005
Your poem opens doors to a multitudes of poetic theme possiblilties! Interestingly stimulating! I love it!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 30, 2005
A universe of the rejected--interesting.

Ron

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on October 16, 2005
Good "beat" beat. All you need is a smoky room and a beating drum.
Enjoyed.

Reviewed on October 14, 2005
Poetry is layers of provoking thoughts -

A good poet/artist can edit the poem to his/her likings. It is written from his/her heart and soul. No one can justify what struck the poet to write the poem. To be fair, we will have to read the receive whatever vibes the poem gives us. We all lead different lives, so we all interpret the poem with different views.

A good poem will give the readers many expressions. Between the lines, it can be read into many things according to what you know about the poet; but what you don't know about the poet are the things you'll need to learn. That is why one should never judge another until they get to know the person well.

But who are we to judge others of what they write is right or wrong when the words are from their hearts and souls?

A good way to produce a good poem is to edit it afterward. Many of my older works need editing. When I re-read them now, I would think to myself, "Wow!, did I write that?" - and yet at the state of mind at the time, it was justified to write that to vent.

But then again, when one who read that had same experience in life, my poem would speak volume for this reader.



A poem - whether it is a hit or a miss - depends largely upon the reaction of its readers.

...above is just my 2 cents worth of opinion...

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 13, 2005
uniquely provoking and stimulating write ... excellent images ... in a parallel universe, poetry is consigned to the observer's experience of deciphering the multilayered realities present in the universal design and its evolving aftermath in time ... such poetry can be viewed only by the cosmic audience and can never truly be destroyed ...

really like how you concluded this poem ...


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