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Lilly was a Grape (Erotica Repost)
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Lilly was a grape
She hung from the vine like Morning glories
Entrapping my soul with her tall lean body
Her love was a walnut in the shell
Perched like a finch over a plum mound
She arched her back in a kind of habit
While wiggling her hips into place
Shifting like sand on the Sahara
While I was hungrily floating above
Her belly was a slender thin thread
That connected her abdomen and torso
As if it were suspended by a wire
And I walked a tight rope in between

Lilly was a grape
When she kissed it turned my skin sweet
Feeding me with cherries and chocolates
Her breasts were accusative
Of crimes against nature and humanity
Symmetrically carved envelopes
Mailed directly to the animal in me
Their diameter told stories of lust
They were the piñatas at festivals
Where everyone got drunk and merry
And a thousand fools would pass out
And wake up on the floor crying
If they would be able to survive the storm

Lilly was a grape
Her jaw was an icy precipice
Where avalanches were born
And I would be overrun by ghosts
Of men that have tried before me
To scale her essence to glory
To ponder her natural beauty

Lilly was a grape
And how many times did I consume her?
Just as my desire for her consumed me
And when I partook of her essence
I went on a non-stop feeding frenzy
Knowing that I could never be full
Her lovemaking was my addiction
Each time that I took what she gave
Was as intoxicating as the first time

Lilly was a grape
Firm and yet tender as ripened fruit
Her youth inspired stone to melt
Her body was a monument
Chiseled by the gods
Each with his own version of art
And no one could fault their design
It was flawless and I could not resist
A taste of her was a taste of heaven
Leaving me always wanting more
I find nothing but shame for myself
Because I am too weak to stop
Knowing that I will always want her

© 2001-2003 Amor Sabor

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 Reviews of "Lilly was a Grape (Erotica Repost)"
Reviewed by Neesie Rojas
Reviewed on February 15, 2014
Beautifully written, the passion ...so intense of wanting and needing this erotic love making... It brings the reader in and never let's them go.... Give a warm sensation inside.... I loved it. Thank you for sharing Amor :)

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on July 14, 2007
OOOOOO So Erotic and delightful! Truly a PURRRRRRR feast! SC

Reviewed on October 26, 2003
"Lilly was a Grape"

filled with immense and intense imagery!

A Sensuous and free flowing write~Amor

Keep penning and best of luck!

Reviewed by Lawrance Lux
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
The One you will never get out of your mind! I know of the Passion still unspent. lgl

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2003
Ohhhh Amor, and such a sweet grape fruitated to a perfected wine!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1
Reviewed on September 16, 2003
I know what you are saying, you are a lucky man! Sweet and juicy indeed!

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
Flawless!!!! and I'll always think of this when I have grapes... :>)
Jenni

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on September 8, 2003
got my juices flowing, sweetly
yes,the pleasure

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on September 8, 2003
Lilly was a grape eh?
well....as long as Lilly wasn't an ape,that's cool.As always your metaphore is excellent.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 7, 2003
Amor the passion in this poem could fuel a rocket...exquisite word usage , your are a wordsmithmaster;-)

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on September 7, 2003
Lily was a grape and she surely must have been awfully sweet; and probably still is. Excellent work Sabor! Bill Murray

Reviewed by Andrea Williams
Reviewed on September 7, 2003
Amazing! such depth and passion. How wonderful to have experienced such in your life. My longing is great for one eight of such a banquet! well done!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 7, 2003
Just as beautiful and impressive as the first time I read it. You are a master poet Amor.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on September 7, 2003
..Lilly was a grape..hmmm..I see...and you were a consumer...hmmm..I see....but....that I do not see...
Excellent write...indeed....
Vesna



Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on September 7, 2003
And once again.....Such truly divine poetry.....like light rain to tease the skin....beautiful. ty, Dani

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
Reviewed on September 7, 2003
~smile~ I never thought of a grape as sexual, until now. Wonderfully written with evocative images. ;) Silver

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
Hi Amor...I have one word for this.....
EXQUISITE......loved every line...very moving...floria

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
Very well written.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
Amor, Amor, Amor, Amor..!!! I have no words except for your name and, "Bravo!"

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
Ah, this poem was written to be sipped like a fine wine. Heady and rich.

Reviewed on September 6, 2003
I'll never look at a grape the same way again; the next time I eat one, I'll think of this write! LOL (((HUGS))) and love, your friend, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D You are truly amazing, Amor! And so is this write!

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
I will never think of a grape the same again...sensually entrancing

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
Beautiful and passionate write! Classy!

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
Amor,
(Thanks for repost.) This is a terrific read - beginning to end! The imagery, divine; the flow, superb; and your words, magical! A real keeper, this one.

Tami

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
I'm so glad to have the chance to read this exceptionally beautiful poem.The imagery is superb and the whole piece, a joy to read.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
I am delighted by this very fantastic smooooth sensual write Amor!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on September 6, 2003
Oh I loved this, beautiful and so lovely, I am so glad you reposted, I never got to read this outstanding poem,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
~Exquisite, my friend
Vivid imagery and the
words have a magical
flow. I loved this.

~~Linda~~

Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
This poem inspired me to melt! (My dream is about control. My life feeling out of it. I try to control it in my dreams, however harmless and fun to do.) But this here is really sensual!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
Your imagery is fantastic and your words as smooth as any poet could wish for. All my senses have been delighted with this write!

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
well done

Reviewed on September 6, 2003
Amor:

This is sooooo beautiful to read. I like it so much. There's beauty in every line and the imageries were wonderful!

Sandie Anel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
I remember reading and enjoying the pleasure in this write before. It's still as good now as it was the first time. Very vivid and colorful. Lisa


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