This is sad yet lovely and precious. I do not know if you intended it to sound like a childs ryhme but it does to me and therein makes it also a precious write too!!!!
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
It was a beautiful poem, John, and please don't blame me. I tried to shoo it out of the way as I passed your house but the darn thing wouldn't leave. I think it commited suicide.
Reviewed by Claywoman (Reader)
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
I loved this John...but how did the little bird die?
Tender and loving write...
I've often felt the same
after seeing a tiny bird
whos singing has forever
stopped. Your heart is
golden.
~~Linda~~
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
How absolutely lovely, John. The grace and beauty within your sweet rhymes is beguiling.. I do believe you have written this sweet bird's essence by writing this just as you have. A very moving write, indeed. katy.
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
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Bonnie
~Nikki~
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
I've often felt the same
after seeing a tiny bird
whos singing has forever
stopped. Your heart is
golden.
~~Linda~~
Leland