While I, invisible, floating or sinking, inhale the sky While I, invisible - this, like Lamb’s ear; soft kiss catching every puff of wind. Field after field, weightless, ruby feathered falling... Away from the blurry edge this quietly lifts in timelessness;these once-in-a-while downy tufts, Cottonwood While I, invisible, floating or sinking, inhale the sky
Distant Stars
Neither rocks, stones, trees, nor even earth has enough gravity to keep me . . . Bright, glittering - I brace my wings on distant stars; this garment, the filament of my silhouette, on this rising moon
Wandering
Simply stars in windfall light; Snow, softly and slowly cascades - wandering white from appleless boughs; The moon, longing
Even though written in a series of three each poem touches upon the other and thus your thoughts are incorporated within each and the other...very nice...
enjoyed.....Art Sun...
Reviewed by Linda Luna (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2006
Deborah,
Simply beautiful..you shine such light in this world..have a wonderful new year. From the Eastern Shore of Maryland.
Linda Luna*
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
I liked the middle the best....but then I have always been out there :-)
Beautiful write my friend, much going on in this poem...loved the imagery, awakens one's senses and emotions. I have a flower in one of my flower gardens that is called a lambs ear...it is almost as soft as the real thing...I had to go back and read this again...loved the lines about the rocks and trees...thought of a soft spirit floating toward heaven...beautiful my friend, simply divine.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
The drug called "The Shari" has been used for vision quests over many years. But, when all the rivers start drying up, the tribe must send a young hunter named Tomás on a much more important trip through the Amazon.
The drug called "The Shari" has been used for vision quests over many years. But, when all the rivers start drying up, the tribe must send a young hunter named Tomás on a much more important trip through the Amazon.
The drug called "The Shari" has been used for vision quests over many years. But, when all the rivers start drying up, the tribe must send a young hunter named Tomás on a much more important trip through the Amazon.
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enjoyed.....Art Sun...
Simply beautiful..you shine such light in this world..have a wonderful new year. From the Eastern Shore of Maryland.
Linda Luna*
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling