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Tippy-toeing gingerly on yesterday.
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Loss.


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On the grave of 'Long Ago'
tenderly trod tippy toe,
gingerly,
lest it should know
that I tresspassed above.
 
Beneath a Vale I wispered low,
a secret that no one would know,
then teardrops poured upon my woe
to mourn the corpse of love.

 

 


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 Reviews of "Tippy-toeing gingerly on yesterday."
Reviewed by Steve Ralph
Reviewed on July 18, 2024
again, so few words, and so much said... I really wish I knew how to do that..
this is absolutely beautiful,
from your Pommie pal.
Steve.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on November 13, 2003
..here we go again ..kindred spirits on the same wavelength..have a look at my poem..GONE
great write!
vesna:)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 12, 2003
Imaginatively expressed in an effective manner. Thank you.

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on November 11, 2003
you are a brave soul Kay. you must not be afraid of stirring up any ghosts.

best wishes

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 11, 2003
very creative write Kay!!

love Tinka

Reviewed on November 11, 2003
This was so beautifully sad, very moving, just touched me so deeply this morning,


Reindeer

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 10, 2003
very creative poem... perfectly stated!

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on November 10, 2003
I like this Kay!

Jack

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on November 10, 2003
This poem is not about anyone dead,it's just about
remembering a lost relationship ....sometimes I
tiptoe on its grave.
You are all so wonderful,I love you all.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 10, 2003
Wonderful write!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 10, 2003
Kay, one can certainly feel the pain between the lines in this poem. I think that I have Tip-toed the same way at one time or another in my life...Thanks for a beautiful way to express a memory of someone passed...Peace, Ed & Rufuz (w00f)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 10, 2003
You tippy-toed into a marvelous poem here, Kay.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 10, 2003
Kay another Gem!You should have a priceless necklace by now(or Tiara;-)Superb unique write!

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on November 10, 2003
This is just beautiful, Kay. It captures the emotion of longing so well. Excellent.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on November 10, 2003
EXCELLENT Kay!

*Linda*

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 10, 2003
Oh my, what an imagination you have..
Thanks always for your comments
Love ya!
SM0000000000000oooooooo00000000000CH!

Reviewed on November 10, 2003
Great work indeed, Kay!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)


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