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Humbleness Endangered

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Today’s world is flooded with simplistic as well as grand opportunities to get noticed, to receive praise, to go off the deepend in not being able to handle achievement without sinking into one or another form of humbleness endangered. (Image by Odin AI)

Tuesday, April 21, 2026


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Humbleness Endangered

 

The modern ladder glows with metrics—
likes that flicker like candles, titles embossed in glass,
corner offices with names stitched to the door.
Awards arrive with speeches and mirrors,
raises bloom into résumés,
and somewhere between applause and the afterparty
a quiet THANK YOU goes missing,
misplaced beneath the weight of being noticed.

 

We are taught to clench pride with both hands,
to graduate confidence into spectacle,
to let milestones harden into crowns.
The line blurs—self‑trust turns to self‑adventure,
achievement tilts into announcement,
until narcissism wears a polite smile
and self‑aggrandizement forgets
how many hands steadied the climb.
Still, there is a way to be tall
without standing on others.

 

History offers lanterns:
Marie Curie, bowed over glowing discoveries,
washing her own tools, naming no throne;
Florence Nightingale, measuring mercy by footsteps taken
after the celebration ended;
Nikola Tesla, dreaming currents for everyone,
owning little more than wonder;
Fred Rogers, steady as a cardigan,
choosing gentleness over grandeur.
Greatness, they show us, can manage arrogance—
can set aside conceit, haughtiness, egotism, vanity,
pomposity, insolence, and hubris—
and still walk forward unburdened.

 

Pause here.
Look into the mirror where happiness waits lightly,
asking not to be buried in the dark vaults of the soul.
Humbleness is a key, small and ordinary,
yet it opens rooms we live in.
A child steps forward—offers a dandelion,
stem bent, breath held—
and an adult kneels, smiles,
and says THANK YOU
as if it were the rarest gift.

 

 


 



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on April 25, 2026
This bountifully captures one of the most essential elements of humanity. I gravitate to these lines: “how many hands steadied the climb.
Still, there is a way to be tall
without standing on others.” and the line:
“Humbleness is a key, small and ordinary,
yet it opens rooms we live in.”
Beautifully written, Odin. ~~ djl

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on April 22, 2026
This piece reflects certain wise insights that some glean from living. "...there is a way to be tall without standing on others" Good line. Humility will teach you how to live calmer and wiser. It will also teach you how to live a good and meaningful life, and how to properly use what you've learned for the betterment of yourself and others. Bloated pride (IMO) makes people feel artificial, shallow, and one dimensional, where humility rejects that spirit and allows a feeling of realness to others. One of the attributes of a true humble spirit is remaining teachable, always, irrespective of how much you already know. Reflective thinking, Kent. Peace...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 21, 2026
A beautiful way to express the power of humbleness. You and I have both lived long enough to see it in real life.

Like how I remember the way that Herb Morrison, the guy who watched and reported the Hindenburg blowing up in his face, treated me as a newcomer to the community and how he kindly bought groceries for a 93-year-old recluse.

Ron


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