Humbleness Endangered
The modern ladder glows with metrics—
likes that flicker like candles, titles embossed in glass,
corner offices with names stitched to the door.
Awards arrive with speeches and mirrors,
raises bloom into résumés,
and somewhere between applause and the afterparty
a quiet THANK YOU goes missing,
misplaced beneath the weight of being noticed.
We are taught to clench pride with both hands,
to graduate confidence into spectacle,
to let milestones harden into crowns.
The line blurs—self‑trust turns to self‑adventure,
achievement tilts into announcement,
until narcissism wears a polite smile
and self‑aggrandizement forgets
how many hands steadied the climb.
Still, there is a way to be tall
without standing on others.
History offers lanterns:
Marie Curie, bowed over glowing discoveries,
washing her own tools, naming no throne;
Florence Nightingale, measuring mercy by footsteps taken
after the celebration ended;
Nikola Tesla, dreaming currents for everyone,
owning little more than wonder;
Fred Rogers, steady as a cardigan,
choosing gentleness over grandeur.
Greatness, they show us, can manage arrogance—
can set aside conceit, haughtiness, egotism, vanity,
pomposity, insolence, and hubris—
and still walk forward unburdened.
Pause here.
Look into the mirror where happiness waits lightly,
asking not to be buried in the dark vaults of the soul.
Humbleness is a key, small and ordinary,
yet it opens rooms we live in.
A child steps forward—offers a dandelion,
stem bent, breath held—
and an adult kneels, smiles,
and says THANK YOU
as if it were the rarest gift.
Still, there is a way to be tall
without standing on others.” and the line:
“Humbleness is a key, small and ordinary,
yet it opens rooms we live in.”
Beautifully written, Odin. ~~ djl
Like how I remember the way that Herb Morrison, the guy who watched and reported the Hindenburg blowing up in his face, treated me as a newcomer to the community and how he kindly bought groceries for a 93-year-old recluse.
Ron