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Foreheads Learning to Breathe

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Nocturnal hours are where dreams find solace from daytime’s schedule of thinking chores, decision leaps, and occasionally allowing time its progress.

Wednesday, April 29, 2026


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 Foreheads Learning to Breathe

 

 

By day the forehead is a locked archive,
creases stacked like fault lines holding back alarms.
Each thought tightens the skin’s horizon,
a brow clenched against invisible winds.


But night loosens the hinges,
creases drift apart like continents in slow amnesty,
and the face remembers water.

Sleep opens with no clear geography.
Staircases melt into feathers.
Clocks kneel.
Across the brow, lines become canals
where breath ferries itself quietly downstream,
lungs learning from tides,
worry dissolving into silt.

 

In dreams, the mind misplaces its armor.
Cities sprout inside ribcages.
Foreheads glow like blank pages under lunar ink,
rewriting injuries as parables.


Even fear appears barefoot,
setting down its weapons to listen
to fields growing where sirens once stood.

Sometimes the dream turns surgical,
hands of light pull splinters from memory,
smooth the scar-tissue of thought.


The brow sweats starlight, not effort,
creases breathing wide as cultivated earth,
rest healing what vigilance could never reach,
the body believing itself again.

 

When waking comes, it brings its questions,
its sharpened edges, its weight of consequence.


But…

 

The forehead hesitates,
holding the echo of that deeper breath,
remembering how silence once entered cleanly,
how peace fit the face without demand,
if only for the duration of sleep.

 

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 3, 2026
Your prosetry emphasize the importance of sleep. The time when we can unscramble all of the tenseness derived from the efforts of the day to deal with not only the planned, but the unexpected.

As I read, the images flowed past my mind like one great huge surrealist masterpiece. Perhaps if you put AI to the task of creating an image of what you have written, it might be able to do it…in some future time.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on April 30, 2026
As I've come to learn: some of what we've gained in this life can be lost, but a dream can never be undreamed. Perhaps our greatest achievements cannot be experienced unless they are first dreamt. Perhaps dreams are the seedlings of the realities that begin to formulate in our waking hours. Perhaps to understand someone deeper, (and more fully) you need to look at what they aspire to, instead of what they've already accomplished. Enjoyed your thoughts. R


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