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Learning Love's Natural Laws

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Perhaps there is no end to the lessons to be learned by the raw exposure of love’s often rocky path. I was once fathered by w such a man.

Monday, May 4, 2026


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 Learning Love’s Natural Laws

 

He loved her like a fist closing around a river,
knuckles whitening as the current ran blue and wild.
He built fences out of railroad iron and promises,
dragged them across fields of her breath,
believing motion could be arrested,
that desire would stand still if he shouted its name.

 

His wanting learned to pace,
a wolf circling its own reflection in ice,
muscle and hunger blurring together.
He pulled her by the gravity of his fear,
a tide that swelled and withdrew too fast,
salting every tender thing it touched.

 

Possession ate the light:
windmills stalled and birds veered off mid-sky.
They became a traffic snarl of hands and expectations,
heat rising, engines revving nowhere,
love mistaken for leverage,
motion confused with control.

 

Then the opening…

 

A loosening, like spring runoff.
He learned the only love he can possess is that for the self,
a hearth he tended, not a chain he threw.
From there, love moved outward as weather does:
shared breath, open field, a generous being,
love lived, not held, offered to her, to trees, to rain.

Such became a fulfillment of their remaining years,

Thus a father and mother found peace as

withered hands held each other most of their waning years.

 

 



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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on May 5, 2026
Such a powerful poem of how love can wobble when fear tries to hold it still. The early images—fists, fences, stalled windmills—capture the cost of possession with meaningful clarity. The turn toward release, where love becomes weather rather than ownership, gives the poem its deep grace. The closing lines, with two aging hands finally at peace, feel quietly redemptive.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 5, 2026
From your prosetry I gathered that love is a many tumultuous thing. Only tamed in later life when the parties realize it's not just while passion, but steadfast sharing, that counts.

Fortunately, I've never viewed love that way. While my parents bickered over money, and my mother laid the law down in later life, they stayed together in an uneasy truce. If they held hands, I never saw it.

Ron


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