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A Merciful Sensorial Symphony

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Dreams nocturnal and daylight’s reality of images have lately become one by the person of my dreams , identity unknown.
Movement of both mind and heart have become a muical journey through a time past and time coming up… just up ahead.(Image bu Odin AI)

Sunday, May 10, 2026


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 A Merciful Sensorial Symphony

 

 

He reads horizons
as if they were scores left open,

lines of distance
rising and falling
on an unseen staff,

each mile a quiet measure
where something begins
already carrying its ending.

At certain pauses the music gathers,

a cup cooling in a remembered hand,
a bridge holding two halves of a decision

 not yet spoken.

Silence leans close
like someone about to forgive.

 

First movement…

 

There are orchards
where time ripens unevenly,

apples bruised with what was loved,
pears softening toward what may yet be.

He walks through them slowly,
hearing beneath the wind
a steady undertone,

loss learning its shape,
joy refusing to disappear.

 

Even the air seems to say:
stay a moment longer
or leave now,
but listen.

 

Second movement…

 

Cities of glass tremble with reflection,
faces passing like fragments of unfinished chords.

Regret curls in narrow streets,
not as flame but as warmth that lingers after,

the body’s heart remembering what the mind cannot hold.

Signposts flicker at corners:

rest here,
turn back,
become otherwise and each one feels true
for a breath before dissolving.

 

Third movement…

 

He gathers what he can,

a mountain easing snow from its cornices,

like letting go of an old name,
a river relearning its direction without apology,
a sparrow stitching its brief song
into the fabric of morning.

 

He feels it now,
not as thought,

but as rhythm:

the inexorable unfolding,
movement into movement,
no final note yet struck,
yet all of it already underway

.

Final movement…

 

Still he rises,
not escaping but carried,

held within currents that ask nothing
but willingness to continue.

Patience stands beside him,
quiet as breath between notes.

 

A final tremolo shimmers…

 

Ahead, a turning,

soft, unannounced,
familiar as a remembered voice just out of hearing.

And there,

from the ground that never truly releases us,

a feather lifts,

slow, improbable,
answering a music no one can stop,

floating upward toward another way station
patient death just ahead.



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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on May 11, 2026
A beautifully attuned piece in the form of words on a poetic page, quie, , and full of lived sensation. I like how you move forward, each image opens into the next, creating a gentle current of awareness that feels both intimate and expansive, letting the senses speak for the soul. A serene read that offers itself up like a cure for what ails us, something much needed in today's world.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 10, 2026
Another of your phases of life observations. Ending abruptly with what we all face, eventually. With exception of people like David Attenborough, who seems to go on forever with purpose very high, indeed. Nothing less than saving the planet–what you and I hope for.

While I still don't understand all of your subtle metaphors and nuances, I find your writing to remain partly mystical, and partly predictive.

Keep sharing your liquid memories and muses…

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 10, 2026
Yes indeed, "time ripens unevenly" for most creatively driven people. And there is assuredly a kind of music that leads each of us towards what we are called to accomplish. As it's been proffered: 'the creative process, like a spiritual journey, is intuitive, non-linear, and experiential. It points us towards our essential nature, which is a reflection of the boundless creativity of the universe.' No worries about the lost review. Water under the bridge. Thankfully there is usually something unique and wonderful waiting just around the bend. Enjoyed this exploration, Kent. Framing your message like musical movement work's well. Thanks for sharing. Peace.


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