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invisible Magic

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

“When you want wisdom and insight as badly as you want to breathe, it is then you shall have it.” - Socrates. (Image by Odin AI)

Monday, June 15, 2026


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 Invisible Magic

 

 

Air is the unseen anvil of the atmosphere,

crashing down as 14.7 lbs of pressure per square inch onto the surface of our skin,

balanced perfectly by the equal push of breath from within.

 

It is a restless phantom,pushing through the needle's eye,

shoving past the heavy limbs in a gale, and resting heavy on the tongue,

forgetting it is there until it is compressed in a bicycle tire,bearing the weight of a flying body,

or hissing sharp from a slow puncture.

 

Above…

 

The invisible pillar holds up a soaring hawk,

Even as the turbulent slap of a draft slips through the hairline crack of a closed window.

 

We name it only when it offends us,

a sudden, unwelcome gust that steals our hat,

or the stagnant, suffocating bubble of a closed room

that is a wall keeping the vast, shifting, weight of the unfathomably unseen.  

 

Air lives most of its life…

 

As a fugitive force,a restless phantom threading  the smallest seams of being,
slipping between leaf and lung,
a thief and a servant in the same instant.


Air shoulders its way through forests with a roar,
then folds itself soft as dust against the roof of the mouth,
a pressure we forget,
a presence we forgive because it is everywhere.

 

It labors quietly in the planet’s unnoticed corners—
lifting feather atop the ocean of unseen arcs,
knowing not of the infinite shore
met by the quiet rebellion of breath,
each inhale a negotiation,
each exhale a momentary truce.

 

Yet…

 

It is also habitually unruly,
a wild arithmetic that refuses balance,

tumbling, fracturing, spiraling into itself,
a gale whipping forth a vortex of impatience,
draft slipping sly fingers through sealed intentions.
It remembers no path, no promise,
only movement:
chaos given breath,
a language spoken in gust, hiss, and howl.

 

We ignore its constant miracle
until it is withheld, or broken, or loud,
or until the room grows thick with absence,
until the wind steals something we thought was ours.


And then…

 

At the beginning of all reckonings,
a newborn, trembling at the edge of light,
draws in this unseen tide for the first time,
and cries its joy of life in a sudden storm of air.

 

 

 

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 18, 2026
Thank you for reminding us of this wonderful air that we breathe and that does so many things as wind, making a cool breeze become and unbearable cold blizzard or literally tear us apart in a tornado. Both magic and mayhem.

The magic of air is that we can breathe it at all. Because it is a mix of several gases, most notably, nitrogen and carbon dioxide. We cannot see them, taste them, or smell them, like our much needed oxygen. But they are there. In the wrong mix, very dangerous.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on June 17, 2026
A fine meditation on the everyday miracle we forget we’re living inside. You turn air into both a force of nature and a kind of fugitive — an anvil, a phantom, a thief, a servant — all held in the same breath. The poem moves almost as wind itself, shifting from pressure to presence to the newborn’s first storm of life. A powerful reminder of the unseen architecture that holds us up and keeps us together.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 16, 2026
Philosophically, the content of this piece is somewhat reminiscent to me of Anaxmenes of Miletus. Another of those pre-Socratic philosophers who attempted to explain the origin of the universe, as well as the first principle of the universe. Air.... certainly being one of the true shared human experiences. The trees and plants, the animals, man; everything shares the same air. The great altruist - air - who shares with all the life it supports. And then the aether... a personification of the air or the upper atmosphere breathed by the Olympians. Very colorful and engaging stuff. Brings back memories of the old days when I eagerly researched mythology. Interesting thoughts Kent. The kind of research that keeps the mind engaged. Enjoyed. Thanks, rlc


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