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Mirroring Me of You, You of Me

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

If you've ever had a dream about family that awakened you suddenly, prodding you to ground its essence for later contemplation, well, this piece about my sons might resonate. After writing it, it occurred to me that perhaps my mind set has more universal meaning than I'd originally supposed. Conundrums, after all, are there to be resolved. (Image by Odin AI)

Saturday, June 20, 2026


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 Mirroring Me of You, You of Me

 

I. The Hands
His hands remember before he does,
the curl of fingers around a hammer,
the quiet patience of tightening, fixing, holding.
The boy borrows them without asking,
lifts them into his own small reach,
tries on their calluses like a future.
Years pass, and one day
the father watches his own gestures
moving through another body.

 

II. The Voice
It begins as mimicry,
a shadow repeating sound.
A tone caught in the throat,
a laugh shaped by listening.
Then slowly it deepens, diverges,
yet still carries that familiar grain,
like wood cut from the same tree.
The father hears himself
in answers he never rehearsed.

 

III. The Distance
They walk apart to learn the shape of themselves,
opposite ends of a long conversation.
The son steps beyond the edge of the father’s knowing,
tests horizons the father only imagined.
Still, in the quiet afterwards,
each returns to the other’s outline,
finding it unchanged in memory,
a map neither can quite discard.

 

IV. The Return

Time folds strangely,
the father aging into questions,
the son into understanding.
They meet again not as before,
but as echoes that finally recognize themselves.
In the son’s care, the father sees
the circle close without ending:
one life leaning into the next,
each becoming what the other once was
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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on June 21, 2026
an intimate and personal expose of the unique relation that can exist, in this case between father and son, appropriately posted on Father's Day. Beautifully imagined and executed. I posted a poem today that explored presence in absence. This poem explores presence face to face with presence, revealing how the self is clarified, challenged, and ultimately deepened through this encounter, the "you" and "me" as inseparable expressions of the same truth. Fine work.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 21, 2026
"They walk apart to learn the shape of themselves." Indeed. A son(s) and fathers relationship can endure many storms and contrary seasons. It can also be a dynamic process of teaching, learning, giving, and receiving. Being a father can be one of life's greatest joys, but it also comes with its own unique set of challenges. The seasons of separation and misunderstanding can be whelming and heartbreaking, and seemingly at times without end. The resolve and insight you are experiencing Kent seems a blessing. Thank you for sharing something this personal. A touching insight that did nothing but good for me. Kudos! Happy Father's Day. rlc


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