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Life's Grammatical Imperative

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

There are so many ways to describe a purposeful journey of discovery. Here is but one. (Image by Odin AI)

Saturday, July 4, 2026


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 Life’s Grammatical Imperative

 

Identity was his name.
Searching was the fire beneath his ribs.

 

He hunted verbs like a starving traveler
hunts distant lights across a winter plain.
A noun without its verb
hung in the air like a lemur over a cliff edge—
fingers spread,
heart pounding,
caught between leap and fall.
He connected together sentences from questions:

what,
where,
how,

until the right adjective modified him
like sunlight breaking through storm clouds,
and the period fell into place
with the click of a combination’s final opening number.

 

Behind him stretched the wreckage:
misspellings of ambition,
misused tenses of hope,
paragraphs of failure scattered like torn pages
across the windswept road he had climbed.

 

And when he began the last chapter,
he found the premise hidden in plain sight:
Without movement,

a man becomes a dangling participle of stagnation,

swinging above a blank page,
forever an unfinished ending.

 



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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on July 6, 2026
As a long teacher of English grammar, I thoroughly enjoyed the way you turned grammar into a kind of living body, beyond the body of structure for words that it represents. Here we have the hunt for verbs, the peril of a noun suspended without motion, the wreckage of misspelled ambitions, a portrait of our lives all assembled thru the symbolism of language and its grammar. God forbid that we end up as a "dangling participle" stagnating without movement "swinging above a blank page" wishing to be the expression of better grammar. Thoroughly enjoyed this one.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 5, 2026
Well written and grammatically correct. I was going to get you on the hanging participle but you got me first.

Will we ever get our grammar correct? Probably not as long as we write. But I never want to leave a widow all alone with no other words to comfort her. By all means use widow suppression for its great expression.

Intensely enjoyed,

Ron

Reviewed by jeanne watson
Reviewed on July 4, 2026
"And when he began the last chapter,
he found the premise hidden in plain sight:
Without movement,

a man becomes a dangling participle of stagnation,

swinging above a blank page,
forever an unfinished ending."

... to soar
... to hide
... to lead
... to follow

... to ?

Which to we choose to be our imperative path?

I choose to love this poem. :)

~jeanne


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