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Forfeited Love
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Remembering those days when we were together
Playing in amusement, dancing, longing for each other
Time was vividly true for the petals of love to gather
But in laxity we lost in the crowd for once & forever

I never really cared for love’s sincerity
Enveloped entirely in youth’s insanity
Restless mind couldn’t see things in clarity
Love came & gone leaving me with my vanity

Sun was promising, meadows were green
Days was on efflorescence, nothing seemed lean
In so many things of desire, love was just another thing
I chased after the mirage as love died with broken wings

Now, the sun is dying, evening is already faded
I’ve come out of my groove, completely jaded
I’m feeling for the love that once I degraded
Only to find the footprints of lost love,
still strongly embedded.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Forfeited Love"
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on November 7, 2008
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR WORDS!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
Compelling verses that touch the heart of the reader; thank you, Sourav. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on July 29, 2008
Beautiful heartfelt poetry at its best. I'm glad that I decided to visit your den and give you a read. Thank you for reading my work and taking the time to leave a review.
Regards Chanti

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on July 24, 2008
Nostalgia, regret... honesty and even, perhaps a resurgent youthful surprise and refound hope in the conclusion! A very strong circular feel to this story, I think. I love that last line especially. Thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 20, 2008
well penned ... (suggestion: use larger font if you want to be read)


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