Bill!bill!bill!
I found this piece to be among the very best for every reason
the timing . rhyming , words used , interesting significant truth
expressed Best ever and the contents are worth real consideration.
You wrote this like a king!
poetic king Joe
Exceptional!
Rich Criso Suarez
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
~Linda
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
I found this piece to be among the very best for every reason
the timing . rhyming , words used , interesting significant truth
expressed Best ever and the contents are worth real consideration.
You wrote this like a king!
poetic king Joe
Exceptional!
Rich Criso Suarez