Sin of We II (poem) by Ms Beeds on AuthorsDen

Sin of We II
by Ms Beeds → (All Poetry by Ms Beeds)
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Do not judge lest you be judged....
Sin of We II Why must carnal adventure, Taint purity of soul? Can not sacrificed morality, Be the quested goal? If indulgence pursued, Pure wantonness demanded, Can not schemed seduction, Transcend mores abandoned? If conceit denied consequence, Conspired escape of blame, Can not complacency discarded, Be worth the lust regained? If obsession demanded, Committed leachery, Can not crippled karma, Venerate the sin achieved? If sincerity pretended, Pure fantasy maintained, Can not deceit be revered? As virtue without blame? If lasciviousness, Exempted hypocrisy, Can not depravity sought, Deny mediocrity? If a scarlet letter earned, Pure blasphemy sustained, Can not lapsed morality, Herald naivete slain? If paradise cast aside, Complacency retarded, Can not the fall from grace, Be lost innocence rewarded? If dogged pursuit of sin, Exalted illicitness dared, Can not reclaimed desire, Outweigh a heart's despair? If wayward thoughts, Manifested wayward deeds, Can not contrived seduction, Be applauded when achieved? If moments stolen, Mocked societal censure, Can not carnality sought, Be justified by pleasure? If committed to transgression Prior trusts beyond repair, Can not gasps cherished, Venerate nirvana shared? If reason suspended, Victimized by the Siren's song, Can not resultant consequence, Be toasted right instead of wrong? If the heart surrendered, All artifice rescinded, Can not pain created, Be exactly what intended? 143 - 4

Reviewed by Ann-Carie Writes (Reader)

Reviewed on January 18, 2010

Subtle. I get it.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on January 6, 2010

Wonderfully penned, the rhyme and flow are flawless and the questions thought provoking.

Reviewed by Carin Spirit

Reviewed on December 19, 2009

Hi Ms. Beeds,

This is the bottom line. 'Do not judge lest you be judged....'

Warmth and Love to you, Carin'

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on December 1, 2009

Lots of questions to tempt the moralists debate over love and passion versus right and wrong...interesting and thought provoking.
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