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Shuga 1+1
by Lisa Hilbers → (All Poetry by Lisa Hilbers)
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Shuga, 1+1


 


Now Bobby Joe sits on death row,
in a rack that darkness haunts-
But every night his mind goes back-
to all those tease and taunts


 


He feels her breath there on his cheek,
her whispers in his ear-
Sweet Cherrie’s fingers in his hair,
her body pressing near


 


The books she dropped they are his gavel,
her eyes his sentence long-
Her voice; Her smell; Her sweet, sweet smile,
‘tis a lonely siren’s song


 


His hearts in rhythm with every breath,
when will he take that walk?
Each time the guards pass by his cell,
they laugh and mention, Hell


 


What they don’t know is
Bobby’s there-
That place they’re calling Hell-
He’s been there ever since the night-
The night his Sweetheart fell


 


Now Bobby knows his time is close,
he’s heard them taking bets-
On when he’s asked, if he’ll just say,
“I have no regrets”


 


It’s been told as he walked that hall,
that a tear formed in his eye-
He smiled and called out Cherrie’s name,
then told his Papa bye


 


While Cherrie Lynn danced Heaven’s halls,
its Bobby she wants most of all-
She drops her wings there at his feet-
Calls him Dumplin’ and Shuga Sweet


 


© Lisa Hilbers
February 14, 2007


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 Reviews of "Shuga 1+1"
Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)
Reviewed on March 4, 2007
Dear Lisa:

I just read the set up for this Shuga (1-2) and had tremendous chills. Now the final walk for Bobby does the same. Who can say he's on death row by mistake? Like an old fifties/sixties song. Well written pieces both. Thanks.

Kathy

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on February 20, 2007
Beautiful
love in waiting for the time is near
hopeful and different
enjoyed!!!

Reviewed on February 19, 2007
Lisa,

HOW did I miss this one? What can I say?? Shattering!!!!!!!!!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 15, 2007
Do I need to say anything???

Tears are the order of the day!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on February 14, 2007
Nice sequel, Lisa. It is sad that he died with the world believing him to be guilty of her death, but for him, living without her was only a half-life anyway. Beautiful Valentine's write, Lisa. I hope you have a very romantic one.

Take care,

Sherry

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 14, 2007
Lisa,

(Shuga 1+1) That adds up to two in any book. Perfect rhyme and flow my friend.

Reviewed by x x (Reader)
Reviewed on February 14, 2007
I do love a good tear jerker! Enjoyed!

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on February 14, 2007
Wow! This was some write my friend, I enjoyed it much...excitement, love, lust, and drama! Outstanding write! Happy Valentine's Day my friend.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 14, 2007
Great drama unfolding even as we go into the second poignant part of this realistic and human story. Well done Lisa, my friend. Hope you enjoy a wonderful Valentines day with lots of love and chocolate.

Fee

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on February 14, 2007
I believe this is Part 2 of a saga that "could" go one more poem before Bobby meets his demise. So well written and a great story. Thanks for sharing.
George

Reviewed by Sharon Jordan
Reviewed on February 14, 2007
I can feel the tears coming!

Hugs and blessings,
Sharon

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 14, 2007
Very well written, Lisa.

Reviewed on February 14, 2007
Excellent story in poetry form, Lisa; you are a master at these! BRAVA; very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love from Burleson, your fellow Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on February 14, 2007
I love it--as I did the first part. This sounds like the Ode to Billy Joe by Bobbie Gentry. Nicely done and has a rhythm like music does.

Reviewed on February 14, 2007

I think Erato is smiling and dancing everytime this "Shuga 1+1" is read loud.

I did enjoy the reading and felt the aroma of this beauty Flower.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 14, 2007
That place they’re calling Hell-
He’s been there ever since the night-
The night his Sweetheart fell

Truly a very sad tale, Lisa.




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