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Last Hug
by Brenda Joy Dobson → (All Poetry by Brenda Joy Dobson)
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Give hugs often, for you never know when it will be the last one that you share. bjd

She came to my GED classes,

Faithfully,

in seven weeks,

never missed one.

Stayed late,

often asking questions

as though her life depended on

the fullness of

each lesson's absorption rate.

Thanksgiving Eve, snow was falling

ever so gently, giving a pristine look

to the projects' grounds.

She looked tired, face drawn, so

I offered her a ride home.

We had time to chat a bit;

she told me of each struggle, living on

next to nothing, trying to make good,

a city transplant from the rural south.

"I'm's sick alot, but I jus' gotta do this."

So tired, yet, her eyes had that special "mother-glimmer"

when she spoke about her only son,

17 now,with so much promise.

She said, "He wants to be a research doctor.

He makin' A's, on the honor roll, ya know.

And here I am...can't even read." 

I said, "You can learn, don't be afraid. Besides,

I see how proud he is of you, just for trying."

"I can really do this then," she said, 

'cause I live for that boy's smile.

He's my heart."

I reached over and gave her the warmest hug,  ever...our last.

bjd

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Last Hug"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 24, 2009
This is meaningful and very compelling, Brenda. Thanks for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on October 24, 2009
I LOVED THIS BRYNN...YOUR UNQUE WORKS ARE ALWAYS AN ENJOYABLE READ THAT SAYS JUST ENOUGH...TO BE PERFECT. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on October 24, 2009
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on October 23, 2009
A sensitive and heartwarming piece. Your words ring so true for me...I remember the last hug I gave my husband...Nov 4th 2008...
Hugs, Diana

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on October 23, 2009
This is as touching as it gets.
You really pluck the heartstrings here.

John


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